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Old 02-06-05, 10:34 PM   #1
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Deep Cover Freestyle

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/jiddyjid.htm

And it begins...
Just did this to see what it feel like (no homo).
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Old 02-06-05, 10:35 PM   #2
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Super dope man!
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Old 02-07-05, 01:07 AM   #3
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cant hear wat ur sayin....... take the cotton balls out ur mouth
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Old 02-07-05, 06:00 PM   #4
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Damn...................
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Old 02-07-05, 09:06 PM   #5
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not bad,not great either- quality is worst part, and shit just cuts out at the end... eh.

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Old 02-07-05, 11:47 PM   #6
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Listening..

Your vocals are too high.
Quality is ass.

Flow falls off.. quite a bit..

Lyrics arent very good.. even for a freestyle..

You need to talk louder.. In the middle you just like, die out..
I cant understand what your saying towards the end..

Mic presence sucks..
You had decent breath control at the beginning.. at the end it wasnt very good..

Overall, not a very good track.. even for a freestyle.
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Old 02-08-05, 01:50 AM   #7
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You sound like youre scared kinda.

quality = a$$

flow was OK .. but fell off... a lot..

Lyrics werent great.
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Old 02-08-05, 07:30 AM   #8
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lmao at the begining: look look look look look,bad quality,not bad,good beat lol,if its a freestyle well your not bad,good drop overall
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Old 02-08-05, 08:04 AM   #9
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gottaasswhoopin and ranks..same people? yes

the song is koo you have talent just get a better mic...
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Old 02-08-05, 04:47 PM   #10
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lmao... and you always diss dzk. LOL.. this is why i flamed u and socrates.. netcees dont have ground to form such strong opinions ....
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Old 02-08-05, 05:54 PM   #11
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^ Like DZK ain't a netcee. And like you aren't niether.
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Old 02-08-05, 06:01 PM   #12
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not too bad had an o.k flow but quality wasn't gud, keep droppin...


plz return fav on my acuity battle track...

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Old 02-08-05, 06:04 PM   #13
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BLAH for qualiry...you need some work in everythin...you sound like your nervouse or somethin...you just need to become more confident on your tracks...flow was a'ight...becomin more confident is your first step to elevating. Return the fave "Tides of Change". Thanks.
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Old 02-08-05, 06:42 PM   #14
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gottaasswhoopin and ranks..same people? yes

the song is koo you have talent just get a better mic...

Why do people always blame the mic? My mic cost me $9.95 and I've been using it since I started.....you can do all kinds of shit to make your quality sound better, it just takes practice and a little know how.....it all comes with time
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Old 02-08-05, 06:48 PM   #15
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im feelin that shit
Super dope man
i like the structure
and it had good lyrical content
and vocab
good drop
ill give it a 8/10
return the favor
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