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Old 02-15-05, 01:19 PM   #1
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Dope Freestyle

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acusations keep being thrown im sick of home
how would u feel everyday being on ya own
lost my feelings developing an ill sickness
stop the thickness you know im clever twisted
don't have fits bitch i'll rip inside ya like clits
got the best gift I flip sometime when I sit
gotta be always on my feat can't get no sleep
sick of freaks writing im'a destroy u wid the beat
let me sweep ya feet n drop kick ya like ninja
im still the sinner baby Ive just become more iller yea
im scarier den a thriller just a plain evil killer
theres no one been realer im a trained blood spiller
you know im a mad rapper so dont ever deny it
not unless you wanna see me come cause a riot
i'll leave ya frightened and leave you half eaten
rip vocals out so I cannot here you ever speakin
while ya takin a pistol beatin shutup when I talk
ur gonna understand me like blackboard and chalk
I could rap for days cuz i wanna get outta dis place
everythings on my case all i need is... a little space
I feel like things are a waste don't know wat 2 think
other rappers stink i'll wrap ya neck around this bling
I dunno if im commin or going I never see whats ahead
i'd rather fuck a bitch and lik her clit in my room instead
everyone seems contious to see what im about to say
get the hell out my way get ur brain shot wid an ak
watch ya brains spray over ya carpet gettin decay
think about the things say so no one has 2 end this way
i'm bring ya hurtful tears expressing my energy of pain
im not gonna be tame for long I wanna make ya drained
wanna make you unstable feel like ya clinically ill
your words are useless why use words when i kill
you'll think this is a film when I murder you brutally
what ever you gotta say will never ever effect me
you can't even offend me my rhymes are damaging
rhymes will be rampaging like the earth breaking
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Old 02-15-05, 01:33 PM   #2
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rite,


for a freestyle (if it was) it was pretty gud, flow was pretty solid n lyrically it was gud for a freestyle but nothin special, structure was gud n flow seemed gud on the most part, not a bad drop especially for a freestyle


keep elevatin


holla bac with some feed on my newest open mic, thx...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177082
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Old 02-15-05, 01:44 PM   #3
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alrite it was a good lyrical song from me... thanks for your post anyway..
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