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02-22-05, 04:13 PM
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Odi et Amo
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Bitter Rejection - DQ and Mista Auth3ntiq
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I love my life, i get mad hoes pussies everyday
They all want to be in bed with me, yelling my name Never a bomb party, until I step in the fucking place I can clap my hands, and bitches will clap theirs in my face At school, I’m popular, and most of all I’m respected I run a "jock" crew, ever fuck with me and get rejected I'm not all body, I also got brains and good grades Qb of my high school, looking for my face in the hall of fames Fuck the haters that don’t like me, I know all the girls want me I had 12 recent girlfriends, they never reject me, i reject thee . . . So much passion till being together became a routine Treated me like his queen but now my presence goes by unseen Maybe I have myself to blame because I just care too much Those eyes, the way he made me scream with one simple touch Used to talk for hours, I even thought he was my soul mate Suddenly all those things were gone, no changing your fate He'll always find another PussyCat for some bump and grind Was so foolish to fall for his sweet talk: I never declined Ignored all words of advice so now I gotta pay the price But believe me, never in my life will someone fool me twice . . . There’s this one girl that is different from all the other hoes She is like this perfect angel or the most beautiful rose Where should I begin? Well, first of all she’s got softest skin I need a girl like that around me, a girl I can talk to from within Other girls just focus on my figure, lips they like to kiss I’m getting bored, tired of hitting ass, it’s her I start to miss Eyes as blue as the ocean filled with emotion, deep as a river Wanna get serious ‘cause thought of losing her makes me shiver . . . *phone rings* Hey baby girl, can I come over tonight? No and I’d appreciate it if you leave me alone Jake. But Jess, listen to me, I changed and I truly love you, you’re my everyth… You can’t play me like a fool anymore, we done *hangs up* . . . How dare you even call me after all you put me through? Person I put all me trust into, turned out to be untrue Now the time has come to leave and stop being so naïve ‘Cause we’re done, your false promises I’ll no longer believe But I would be lying if I said it was easy to say goodbye When I’m alone, I sit and cry but keep my head up high You won’t see me fall, no matter how we once connected Expect the unexpected: you’re the one getting rejected! DQ: italics Mista Auth3ntiq: bold Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178160 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177740
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02-22-05, 04:27 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP:
 YO THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK, UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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02-22-05, 05:56 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP:
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02-22-05, 06:05 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP:
Tony Green thinks it was hot. Most niggaz a be talking bout gunz and the block but yall kept it real and talked about school. I LIKE THAT. Tony Green gives it a 8/10
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02-22-05, 06:43 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP:
Nice as hell
Loved the concept of the peice, an the rhyming was top notch Keep reppin the famlay y'all
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02-22-05, 06:44 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP:
^^ Werd Thanx For The Feedbacks..............keep This Uppin Yall.
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02-23-05, 06:54 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
Thanks for feedback, much appreciated and up it goes...
DQ
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02-23-05, 08:34 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP:
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02-23-05, 09:55 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
yea this shit was cool both of yall. i liked the concept of the track and i could see mista doin some shit like that. lmao. both of yall was on point with ya verses. shit held together straght. wayto repp the fam
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02-24-05, 01:45 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
^Feedback's much appreciated fam!
DQ
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02-24-05, 01:59 PM
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IP:
wow damn girl bout damn time u drop some shit in here!!! imma hit u up w/ our collab ideas n shit.....but dis was on point, good punches, multies, structure was iight, good vocab...good job u 2....keep it up....1
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02-25-05, 12:31 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
^Thanks for feed girl, yeah...we'll get that collab soon...!
...Uppity up up... DQ
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02-26-05, 05:55 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
Upping this for some more feedback please...favor will be returned!
DQ
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02-27-05, 01:03 PM
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**the council**
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IP:
this was a real nice drop....i loved the way it was like it was coming from both points of view....really original...nice vocab was used and flow was on point...overall i enjoyed reading it 8.5/10.....keep it up
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02-28-05, 02:04 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
Dam Girl That Shit Was Tight Punch Lines Were On Mark
Tha Whole Thing Was Dope Yo' Do Me A Fav Check My Last Open Mic Called(keep Trying) Some Feed Back It Would Be Nice, My Shit Was Mixed Emotion So Not Everthing Was Goin Tha Way I Wanted Any Holla Cb83
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