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02-18-05, 08:51 PM
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Obsession with RV- HOT SINGLE!!
IP: 29DB 69F4
This is for about you people whose lifes are on this one site, for the most part the people who cant stay off!!..i admit that i keep coming back but I wont mention any other names though, you now who you are. oh and this a little bit about the overrated members of RV...check it.. took bout 20 mins... Obsession With RV (Hook...) ...People on this site like to play the god role... ...Act like they whole lifes based on this console... ...Here day to night like its got their whole soul... ...At first it was a game, now its their lifes goals... (-For them newbs-) ...Rapverse is the nest that always infests... ...Little kids that worship and cant contest... ...With all the rest, striving to be the best... ...But the fact is they strive to be obsessed... ...For what! a little internet rep, an 8th subject... ...From the east to west, an online project... ...That infect their minds instead of protect... ...Look at high rec emcees as Holy Objects... (Hook...) ...People on this site like to play the god role... ...Act like they whole lifes based on this console... ...Here day to night like its got their whole soul... ...At first it was a game, now its their lifes goals... (Now the Obsessed & Overrated) ...In the beginning, this was just a little something... ...That would take our minds off what was happening... ...In our lifes at home, work, school and everything... ...We would make up an excuse to log on, anything... ...But this fling, became more than what we had thought... ...More than any of us would think on how it could rot... ...Our minds, and signify the launch our verbal distraught... ...Now we're all livin here as if we grew up and got taught...
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02-18-05, 09:17 PM
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IP: 29DB 69F4
uppin for feedback plz....
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02-18-05, 09:50 PM
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IP: 29DB 69F4
uppin for some feedback before i log out..
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02-18-05, 10:28 PM
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 6804 D41F
its cool what ya sayins true and when ya on hear for along time yta get sick of it fast im gettin sick of it too but for some reason i keep comin back here............................
ya had some nice multis nice rhymes an ight hook and ya vocabs cool keep workin man
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02-18-05, 10:30 PM
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aight this was a coo joint...flow was kinda basic tho...could use some multis and internals to give the flow a lil flare yamean...i like the concept...i see where you going with this just need to work on enhancing ya flow fam...stay up aight. 1
return the fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177734
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02-19-05, 10:21 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 97A8 78C3
Concept hasn't been handled before I think and I loved it because it's all truth in there. Hook is hot, seperate parts were cool though. Liking the multis for sure, is a plus point and adds another dimension to the piece. Found a good balance with your vocab, had your flow on lock (was improved by the use of multis) and structure was cool. Really feeling this drop, nice going man!
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02-19-05, 03:53 PM
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IP: 29DB 69F4
uppin for some more feedback....
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02-19-05, 08:26 PM
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IP: 29DB 69F4
uppin for feedback or critique...
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02-21-05, 04:37 PM
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IP: 29DB 69F4
upping for some final feedback....or critique....
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