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Linguistics has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 08:36 PM.

ma$term!nd has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 08:43 PM.

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im that lonely flower that CREEPED-FROM-DA-CRACK,
im INCREASING-MAH-STACKS, you CHEAP-AND-JUST-WACK,
naw i take that back, you half DESCENT-IF-THAT, they be like fuck it, aint no BRINGING-HIM-BACK.
dont worry bout living i got CROOKS-THAT-ILL-KNOCK-U,
that keep 'TOASTERS' dat wont COOK-UP-YA-WAFFLES,
wont 'spare-ya-vest' they 'tear-ya-chest', now the cops LOOK-ING-4-FOSSILS,
whoever said you was dope a 'LION KING', they prolly LOOK-LIKE-MU-FASA,
ya girlfriend...body hairy...she prolly LOOK-LIKE-CHEW-BAKA,
'bitch-im-da-best' 'initial-ya-chest' so its no questions WHO-SHOT-YA.

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ya names Ma$term!nd..?, what u expect me to fear ya
and......
u could use the ! mark, still dont mean we gonna hear ya
to dumb to understand, so dued i'll s-p-i-t...s-l-o-w-e-r
cuz hes on vaction from reality, but dued the trips over
u herb man, i'll own ya, cuz i'm the best of the vets
he always lookin ova my sholda...........
............so i spit in the wind, and step to the left
for real, this kid aint worth it, cuz man i'll always be iller
so i aint waist a good closer, so this last lines a filler

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Voted For: Linguistics

meh horrid battle.. neither side came hard at all linguistics has a couple nice punches in there.. but that closer was weak.. it was played honestly... and other dude needs to try something besides multi's.. it sounds bad when thats all u got in a battle.. but ur closer was nice.. so overall this was a close battle ling ling just takes it cause he had more consistent punches.. that is all..

Voted For: Linguistics


Alright Punches Goes To Ling, He Came Decent And Hard With Em, His Structure Was Messed Up Though But Better Then Other Dudes Structure, Your Vocabulary Was There Pretty Good Man Dig This Verse, Try Working On Your WordPlay And Try Not To Force Your Lines Man, Over All Pretty Decent Verse 9/10

Mastermid
Damn! Nicely Done Coz, Punches Wow! It Was Cool, Multi's Was Your Upper Hand Here Though It's What Helped You To Get A Little More Points Then I Would Of Gave You, Structure Is What Fucked You Here Man, Tottaly Chaotic Try And Work On That A Little, And Your Vocabulary Wasn't To Decent...8/10

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Voted For: Linguistics

Ok you win Nos this shit was decent

your personals where dope and your closer was dope
and that spit in the wind line was dope, i just dont understand why you had to make an alias....but your structure was your downfall
and that SPit Slower shit was dope.....you mad murked this kid yo

Masta..you had mad multies but they hwere allwack your whole verse was eack you need to up your game yo
you also need to desperatly work on yoru structure

ummmi would give more feedback but theres no use in that

vote=LIng

I'm not Nos.......................................lol

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i know who you are???????and thats word yo...............

and believe you me your not NOS .......llol
i know who you are tho
hit me up on AIM
QuesLyric

Voted For: Linguistics

im that lonely flower that CREEPED-FROM-DA-CRACK,
im INCREASING-MAH-STACKS, you CHEAP-AND-JUST-WACK,
naw i take that back, you half DESCENT-IF-THAT, they be like fuck it, aint no BRINGING-HIM-BACK.
NO, NO PUNCH AT ALL, BUT YOU SHOULD JOIN THE MULTIE LEAGUE THOUGH
dont worry bout living i got CROOKS-THAT-ILL-KNOCK-U,
that keep 'TOASTERS' dat wont COOK-UP-YA-WAFFLES,
wont 'spare-ya-vest' they 'tear-ya-chest', now the cops LOOK-ING-4-FOSSILS,
SEE THIS IS A NICE VERSE, BUT NOT A NICE BATTLE VERSE, JUST FOCUS ON ADDING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS TO YA VERSES YOULL BE AIIGHT
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ya names Ma$term!nd..?, what u expect me to fear ya
and......
u could use the ! mark, still dont mean we gonna hear ya
GOOD PERSONAL BUT KINDA WEAK PUNCH
to dumb to understand, so dued i'll s-p-i-t...s-l-o-w-e-r
cuz hes on vaction from reality, but dued the trips over
DOPE, I LIKE THIS BAR
u herb man, i'll own ya, cuz i'm the best of the vets
he always lookin ova my sholda...........
............so i spit in the wind, and step to the left
ANOTHER FUCKING SICK BAR, GOOD
for real, this kid aint worth it, cuz man i'll always be iller
so i aint waist a good closer, so this last lines a filler
EVEN U KNOW THIS WAS LACKING

LIKE YA STYLE LINGUISTICS, U AINT NEED A DOPE CLOSER TO TAKE THIS, U GOT IT,
MASTER, JUST WORK ON YA PUNCHES AND CUT BACK ON MULTIES, JOIN THE LEAGUE

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