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Still bored free write i guess
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and with... a song in my hand.
i wrote for you "here".. trying to be as calm as i can. we stand for a while. making sure to give subtle smiles. as we walk down ..down that road . i take the chance as i take hold of your hand. when i . place it upon my chest i ask your what you feel . you say " i don't know yet." later on as your eyes start to close. we say our good nights and forget our goodbyes. now we . all we have to do is wait . wait for those rays to shine on the floor. i'll write more later ... i blocked lol
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man, you keep writing great pieces..yea, like you said in my poem thread, if you really are in the mood to just let it come out, great poems can happen in 5 minutes..looks like your on a roll...lol, keep it up.1
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You should have all your poems the same but I think your other poems were better. This looked like it was keyed up. Nice though. Keep em coming.
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