|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|
03-02-05, 06:15 PM
|
#1
|
||
|
Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
|
Fake Rappers!
IP:
Link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1996855
This piece is for all you fake rappers on this site.. you know who u are... Check it.... This one here is for all of you biters and queer actors My rhyme's is sick.. try me bitch.. call this fear factor Just step up to this and i'll smack ya face backwards Wait a minute im almost finished with you fake rappers Im sick of this! Kids is thick and quick to diss, but picture this You fake emcee's couldnt be ill with syphillis and sticky piss Played out like nintendo, thru my window, im pitching bricks Fucking bitches, I speak softly but carry the biggest stick You'll be rigged stiff with rigamortis when i split the corpses The sickest forces got enough shine to eclipse your offense Now takin donations for ya abortion, got grids for torture So you best huddle, chests'll bubble, when i spit the scorcher Next to the pro, emcee's seem makeshift and tasteless Rhymes are basic, so erase it, and enjoy ya verbal facelift This one here is for all of you biters and queer actors My rhyme's is sick.. try me bitch.. call this fear factor Just step up to this and i'll smack ya face backwards Wait a minute im almost finished with you fake rappers I got enough pull to make space shift, when i disgrace kids Im abrassive, ya futures what you make it, so embrace it And prepare for death, dared to test, now ya in a hairy mess Swear youre fresh, but scared to death, when i tear ya flesh I figured you out, so i single you out, and spare the rest Shear ya chest, So grab your blanket and fear my text I slice cats, Plus if you think youre nice, im twice that And now that im on a roll, im never giving the dice back 25 min Keystyle.. feedback appreciated................
__________________
¿Guess Who?  |
||
|
|
03-02-05, 06:57 PM
|
#2
|
||
|
IP:
...shit was kinda funny to me...it actually made me smile
but good piece tho...flow was good, decent topic, and the . structure was aight here, but overall decent piece, though 7/10
__________________
..The Council..
7 Day Theory |
||
|
|
|
03-02-05, 09:26 PM
|
#3
|
||
|
Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
|
IP:
thx for feedback uppin for more......
__________________
¿Guess Who? |
||
|
|
|
03-02-05, 09:36 PM
|
#4
|
||
|
The story goes. Bill, B.
|
IP:
Yp the flow was cool, topic was kinda hot i liked it and it had nice structure and was a pretty easy read... overall good song 8/10
__________________
Hello.
-------------------------------------
You probably know me as LFS. |
||
 
|
|
|
03-02-05, 09:39 PM
|
#5
|
||
|
*~Emericas Finest~*
|
IP:
it was nice, multiples were sick...
__________________
RETIRED
|
||
|
|
|
03-02-05, 09:51 PM
|
#6
|
|
|
Peace, Love, Unity
|
IP:
yeah, it was decent... sick multies, im not gonna lie... but you didn't do any personal lines, and that woulda appealed to me more... but its all good, look for one back son
__________________
 88 miles per hour should do it. |
|
|
|
|
03-02-05, 09:57 PM
|
#7
|
||
|
Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
|
IP:
well i had no one to do personals against, this was just for everyone who's fake lol thx for feedback tho
__________________
¿Guess Who? |
||
|
|
|
03-02-05, 10:04 PM
|
#8
|
|
|
Peace, Love, Unity
|
IP:
haha oh shit, i thought you were directing it towards us cause the link, you should said it was feedbck.. lol
__________________
88 miles per hour should do it. |
|
|
|
|
03-02-05, 10:06 PM
|
#9
|
||
|
Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
|
IP:
lol nah just the OM i left feedback on
__________________
¿Guess Who? |
||
|
|
|
03-03-05, 12:50 PM
|
#10
|
||
|
unknown legend...
|
IP:
yo nice peice...good keystyle and I enjoyed it...nothin special here though...just another keystyle...chorus was aiight...and flow was good..keep it up...
btw return the favour on my battle: me vs. bradley_thomas... much appreciated...
__________________
Unknown Legend... |
||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Hybrid Mode
