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feeling on you....
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feelings for you strong so un percieved
youre the light on my flame hidden so deep wivout u im weak huney, my heart feels so lonley come and swim in my sea and see what i see youre what i breathe what im here for, what i wake for each day promise me u'll stay and neva betray ur ways are engraved, on my heart a tattoo physically and mentally ill show love for you hold me in your arms, emotionlly subdued never confused never cold nor used wivout you im helpless almost incomplete as if i was a jigsaw u'd be my last piece words cant express what you mean to me and its not easy to show you just as u know aswell as i do, i live for you boo nothing can amount to, nothing compares to you and when we make love together i always reminise think of all the times that we shared it was bliss i remember every kiss and how everytime we amiss arguements and feuds we carry on its a trip for my girlx sorry guys been away for a bit but im back! this ones unfinished would just like to hear comments and suggestions crits welcome nuff love Last edited by danja : 07-28-02 at 12:08 PM. |
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Mad props fo` this ...
i cant start to explain how much i loved this, Truely an amazin poem, sweet ... Keep droppin da illness! ~1~ |
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thanks uppin keep the comments flowin
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YO DIS SHYT WAS LOVELY. I LIKE DA WAY IT FLOWED DA HOLE 9. KEEP DROPPEN EM. 1LUV
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thx up
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dam sleepers
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