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Check in by: 03-03-05 at 10:49 PM

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Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 07:31 PM.

At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench
Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air
Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there
His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched
Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep

Hexa has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 08:00 PM.

At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench
Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air
Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there
His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched
Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep

Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker
I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters
You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth*
Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth
The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right
This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*…

*his location
*http://community.rapverse.com/showt...407#post1999407

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Voted For: Os1ris

Well, Os1ris took this one, ya punches were str8, no real multies or personals by either one of u, but...Hexa u need to elavate

No Hate

^^^^^^ uppin for some votes yalll ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Os1ris

ima give it ta os1ris since his shit was atleast decent....hexa ya wack plain N simple...no hate....flow and punches came AIGHt from os1ris....structure was pretty good kinda stretched....

v/os1ris

Voted For: Os1ris

ight both verses were pretty interesting checking out:
flow- or1sis, was structured betta, which made it flow
betta
punches- by both contestants i had pretty decent
wordplay in this battle, but o had more & they
hit alot harder then hexa
personals- o, had alot more, & were alot betta; no hate
but hexa's were pretty lame & didn't form
2 good 2getha
multies- o obviously took this category wit the way he
set his rhyme scheme; hexa u don't need 2
strecth ur lines & look at o's verse & u'll c
vocab- was ok on both parts but nothin' really stands
out
originality- o has the originality all thru his verse & hexa
u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes

uppin this thing ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Os1ris

At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench
EHH, NOT A VERY EFFICIENT OPENER
Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air
Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there
...PLAYED PUNCH WEAK SETUP, TRY TO BE A LIL MORE AGGRESSIVE WHEN YOU BATTLE SOME ONE, THIS VERSES IS LACKING, BUT YOU STILL NEW SO , YOU HAVE PLENTY OF TIME TO IMPROVE YOUR VOCAB AND PUNCHES

Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker
I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters
GOOD PUNCH HEARD B4 BUT NICE TWIST TO IT
You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth*
Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth
HAHA, GOOD WORD PLAY MAN, OVERALL GOOD JOB ON YA VERSE, CREATIVE AND ENTERTAINING,
I GOTTA GO WITH OS1RIS ON THIS ONE
V/OSIRIS
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2005794
RETURN FAVOR PLEASE

Voted For: Hexa

Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker
I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters
decent punch
You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth*
Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth
no
The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right
This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*…
okay, pretty decent here


At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench
good punch hea
Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air
Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there
nope, flow = 2 long + punch was weak
His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched
Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep
kinda good…

Overall Hexa took this one, punches were harder, vocab was good,
Both had good structures but Hexa took this one though

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ok anyways uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Os1ris

meh..heres how i see it

hex
>At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench
-little stretched, not really a punch, poor wordplay 2/10
>Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air
Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there
-not a bad personal, still wordplay is whack 4/10
>His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched
Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep
-uhh, no, stretched, poor wordplay, forced, played 2/10

overall: 8/30...no hate or nothing, but you need to elevate alot, it can be forgivin cause its probs your first battle, just spruce up on things in the tutorials, cause you stretch your lines too much and you dont really have the idea of punches yet, so yeah, keep at it

os1ris...wasnt that great either
>Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker
I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters
-meh, weak, first line was worded poorly....5/10
>You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth*
Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth
-not a bad punch here...6/10
>The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right
This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*…
-not a bad personal, set up was dumb 5/10

overall: 16/30....you got this because you attempted more punches and they hit fairly well, but your wordplay and vocab need to upped, alot, cause it was rough reading it, which also threw off your flow, so keep elevating man....got the right idea down

v/os1ris

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