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03-13-05, 03:31 PM
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"Different Kind Of Gangsta"
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I will edit with links. Honest feedback always returned. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2021392 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2021443 Last edited by Limited Edition : 03-13-05 at 03:52 PM. |
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03-13-05, 03:51 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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good shit, good mixin, nice beat, good lyrics..........................seemed like u mummbled a couple words durin da song, buh still kept on track, chorus hot..................overall, its good..........stay up
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03-13-05, 03:51 PM
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Flyweight
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336 hit me back
listening...........your voice is ok with the beat as far as the mix, you got an accent where you from?you need some work on your delivery, that first verse when you come in your not really flowing you kind of just reading it. you need to memorize it, the hook is ok, you might want to change, but that is best part of the song, i like how the beat breaks down for that too..............really you need to rewrite this, some of the shit just isnt flowing out, and your not rhyming all the time, just my two cents, not a bad drop though |
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03-13-05, 03:58 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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im listening to it right now
The beat is pretty good.. lol no offense..but it sounds like there's something in ur nose.. your chorus is okay.. but it really ain't that catchy... Your on the beat.. but your flow isn't really consistent.. its on flow then not on flow.. but your lyrics are pretty good but seems a lil basic.. well thats just for me.. cuz i've thought of alot of rhymes already.. this isn't te best song i've heard so far.. and isn't the worst.. one thing that will really help your song is the quality.. so that you should work on too 6/10
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03-13-05, 05:31 PM
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I have a nasty cold...that's why it sounds like something is in my nose... |
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03-14-05, 04:12 PM
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i agree with most of this.......flow is a little shakey.......lyrics seem basic....quality is also a little blahh......at least the beat is good......this just isnt one of your better songs.....keep writin 1 |
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03-13-05, 05:51 PM
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lol... It was coo... Voice was kinda ehhh / beat was straight
Hmmmm - Lyrics were nice... The beat had a ugly ass breakdown though
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03-13-05, 05:52 PM
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Aight I gotta pro and Cons list
Pros: Lyrics Flow Deilvery Topic Beat Cons: Mixing Lol 1st time I heard your accent havin voice  Good Job sir.
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03-13-05, 06:24 PM
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not too big on the beat at the intro. it's real 80's. get's much better as it goes on, but it goes too far and become over kill. sounded liek dude put all the sound effects in his library on it when the hook hit. Flow stays on pretty well. lyrics were pretty good. I hate the 1syl rhymescheme and you force all the syls in on some lines. liek you can hear where you rush to deliver al lthe lyrics in the time allotted. The hook is inaudible.
An okay track. The beat is what killed it the most for me. You need some EQing on the hook. 1
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03-13-05, 07:29 PM
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Uppin' for some more feed....favors will be returned...
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03-13-05, 07:32 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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u still seem like u spiting it sentence by sentence, doenst all flow together yet
ull get it eventually. voice is ight, gotta cold i can tell eq is ok beat was diff, it was ight 7/10
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03-13-05, 07:41 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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song...stop bein lazy and post the damn link...lol
kinda tripped out the gate at the start...not bad though ur vocals are clear, but I hate the reverb u got on it...bring it down to a "smaller room" setting would be much better...I.M.O. flow is pretty decent...bordering on decent/good voice is fine lyrics were okay...nothin major either way beat is original sounding...not bad 6/10 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181672 ^^^aiyo...RTF please |
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03-13-05, 08:51 PM
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New to RV
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sorry man i honstly dont think this shit is good really, dont lie the beat and it sounds like you have lyringitis....
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03-14-05, 12:34 PM
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L.E
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Uppin' for some more feedback on this bitch...favors returned...
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03-14-05, 05:39 PM
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vanquising Mc's Daily
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Yo Nice Joint man, I liked the Beat, and the Lyrics were good, But your voice was kinda weird.. it still straight man, i liked the flow.. Nice shit man... Keep dropping..
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