By making this connection with you,
I'm not trying to rekindle our past.
But ultimately, I'm giving us a conclusion.
Closing and locking the doors of our relationship which have been swinging back and forth since the day I met you.
I know for certain that you and me would impossibly exist.
It's simply not written in our fates.
But within the depths of my soul,
I have a glimmer of you that needs to be snuffed.
Or I will forever be taunted and tortured by your small but ever shining light in my life
So before I make choices….
That therefore consequently the probability of me ever seeing you again is small,
On a night of destiny I wish to inhale insanity into my body and exhale all my inhibitions.
And to close your swinging door into my life I know I must first explore everything that door conceals…
Your mind, body, and soul.

Nice poem........i liked that you didnt rhyme shows you have origionality....i liked the deepness it leaves the reader wanting more...........nice metas you really struck gold there...............Great poem........9/10.......keep it coming with peaces like this!
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Very imaginative and I liked your woring and I could see alot coming from you. Just fix some things. Like structure and Title. RTF
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I liked this a lot, this was a good freewrite,with no forged rhyming pattern, i liked your vocabulary, and how you came across in your desired direction, keep dropping man..1

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