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LaSt ChAnCe has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 03:38 PM.

GooD LuCk





Dude Been weak Since before birth Like Women In pernatal ....
and after this Battle Not even ' Funeral Homes ' WIll 'Favor Fatal'||
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.You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last ....
and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass||
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.Work For Nasa and this could still couldnt pop off like a rocket ....
Stick your Bones In Wall Plug's Jus to 'Pop Your Shoulder outta Socket'||

Fatal Lyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 03:39 PM.

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GooD LuCk





Dude Been weak Since before birth Like Women In pernatal ....
and after this Battle Not even ' Funeral Homes ' WIll 'Favor Fatal'||
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.You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last ....
and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass||
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.Work For Nasa and this could still couldnt pop off like a rocket ....
Stick your Bones In Wall Plug's Jus to 'Pop Your Shoulder outta Socket'||

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oh, you cant. damn. I waisted my time. I dont think you can vote on either one of em. damn. CHeck tha post vote allowed tho on tha j rin one. but i think both of em 200 post. oh well, good battle...at least post feedback

yo Nice shit fatal sorry for the double post i misunderstood the posting methods LoL

Voted For: Fatal Lyricist

jeah ghost took this on...

yo his punches just hit harder simple as that.....
the first line was killa

lastchance you need a little fore effort

the structure was easy.....the flow was irrelevant

so the punchlines was the most inportant...

vote ghost

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Voted For: LaSt ChAnCe

Flow: Blah
Punches: Tied
Personals: Tied
Wordplay: Last Chance
Metas: Last Chance
Multis: Neitehr
Enjoyment: Both

Vote: Last Chance

Explanation: Both came decent some good concepts in there just thought last chance edged it because of his wordplay .. yall should rematch........ stay elevating .. stay up .. 1

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Voted For: Fatal Lyricist

I voted for ghost clearly because of wordplay. Ya'll both had good punches in this one, but I gave my voet to ghost because he worded his punches wayy better. last chance, you had some good punches, but you worded em wayy off. you were on the right path tho, but I think you should work on that. ghost, work on creativeness. Both structures were on point, and they flowed well, and the verse looked clean. both had good rhyming. my vote goes to ghost though. I already said why.

RTF. link in sig, and plz make it explained. and if you dont explain, i wont be voting on yall battles no more.

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Voted For: LaSt ChAnCe

LaSt ChAnCe
.You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last ....
and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass||

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Ghost

Nothing...

...LaSt ChAnCe took this one, just came plain harder in this
battle, had harder punches, & a good flow here, & Ghost I see
text'n is not your thing, so you might as well stick to graphix,
no hate though...

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Voted For: Fatal Lyricist

Ghost:

This catz like wet paper itz easy to rip em....
Afta dis battle i'll have his record lookin like systems...
^^opener was nasty i was laughin on dat 1 for a minute

I see your hyped cuz its ya first day, merk u in da worst way...
Here take dis loss, lets pretend todays ya birthday.....
^^ good multi and once again tha finisher on this bar was sick

Letz be serious lemme put on ma game face........
And dis newb 1 LastChance as his name states.....
^^didn't really get tha closer but tha rest was hot


Last Chance:

Dude Been weak Since before birth Like Women In pernatal ....
and after this Battle Not even ' Funeral Homes ' WIll 'Favor Fatal'||
^^kinda played and didn't even rhyme

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.You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last ....
and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass||
^^lmao......best line of tha whole battle

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.Work For Nasa and this could still couldnt pop off like a rocket ....
Stick your Bones In Wall Plug's Jus to 'Pop Your Shoulder outta Socket'||
^^ wtf?...dont get it at all

multies go 2 ghost
wordplay goes to last chance
structure....ghost by far
ghost owned tha punches
and overall originality goes 2 ghost

winner......Ghost

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