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Old 03-30-05, 03:36 PM   #1
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TEXT FAGS(shots at RED BULL and KESSE)

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Nothing Huge..

Taken some shots at Redbull and Kesse.. Check the Joint.. not to long, i got bored wit it after awhile

SONG: TEXTFAGS

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Old 03-30-05, 06:48 PM   #2
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.....even though theyre in my crew ill leave completely honest feed

*listening*

quality is aright....not the greatest...not the worst....

im honestly not feeling your flow...seems a lil bit off....actually fell off a couple times

lyrics are really not that great...for a diss track...im not really feelin it...no lines stood out to me any...when your dissing someone you gotta have some lines that stand out...none of your punches were really that good...when you were talkin about them fucking eachother...im sorry...but that was wack...but its just my opinion....

this feed consisted of absolutely no hate....just tryin to help you out....
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Old 03-30-05, 06:59 PM   #3
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wow....heres some criticism.....try coming up with some new material, instead of consistently saying we are gay together.....your disses were plain, nothing special....next time, try and say something interesting.....or change your voice.....basically that whole track said were "closet fags" and "fuck you text bitches".....pretty disappointing man......but good quality, but your voice sounds like you always have a cold/nasal conjestion
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Old 03-30-05, 07:02 PM   #4
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lol at the pic beside,u look like a fag...nah playing,the beat is dope,exept for one noise,quality is cool,i liked the flow seriously,beat is hella dope,u dont sound like what you look,whos beat is this?,the ecko and shit at the end was gay,anyway good verse,peace...holla if you want a beat
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Old 03-30-05, 10:03 PM   #5
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nah man, i gave some constructive feed......what did you except, for people to really like this?......straight up, it wasn't that good, but alot better than what im listening to right now (infector mindz), your disses were played and whack....like you got good quality and shit, but your lyrics were garbage foo
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Old 03-31-05, 03:30 AM   #6
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whoa

not feelin dis at all

u dont have a flow, u read ya rhymes, i can tell rite now

enuff wit da "Fag,Gay.Homo" shit, them lines iz played

try again
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Old 03-31-05, 03:32 AM   #7
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Aha Weakness...................
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Old 03-31-05, 03:47 AM   #8
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*listenin*

beat is alryyt... your voice is good... not feeling your flow at all... punches are weak, nah sorry but this is a weak diss man u need work on it lol... quality is quite bad but u cant help that... ermm thats it really lol not good at all u need elevation
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Old 03-31-05, 07:47 AM   #9
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Blah this was not big

Work on sylables cuz yo flow is off............
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Old 04-01-05, 07:14 PM   #10
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had a tight beat no doubt but the flow was sluggish n the punches didnt come hard enough

overall 5/10
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Old 03-30-05, 08:58 PM   #11
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yea yo flow is elementary...



what he said... you go word by word way to slow....practice about a 100 times so you can be smooth on the next one...wait by then you prolly woulda pawned your mic ..thank god...could i get a discount on fries?
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