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04-02-05, 04:59 PM | #1 | |
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How I feel about all these deaths...and in general...POEM
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between my left and right chest i feel strain
the lights dim in the room, and in my heart i feel pain, and turmoil and terrible things even a parable can't bring me out this peril god's sparrow can't even sing, it's a bee sting deep within, it's terminal and no one cares i look up and see emptiness, no one is there to meet eyes, to me, I'm incomplete, i'm invisible like air, time I seek but i'm weak and death surrounds me, whether real or dream i was born alone and alone I be i hope to see spring turn cold into heat what is truly real, what I truly feel is truly nill, nullified and void an open space of silent noise, Lord please save this soul of mine I cry i don't know who i am now, I lie i need your hand to hold me down when i can't stand on my own, what is it to die i feel it when i open my eyes The End |
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04-02-05, 06:55 PM | #2 | |
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put this is in tha poem forum or somethin
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04-03-05, 04:32 AM | #3 | ||
Engineer / Club Promoter
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WHO GIVES A SHIT??
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04-03-05, 02:31 PM | #4 | |||
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^ I have to agree. |
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04-03-05, 02:05 PM | #5 | ||
Burnt face man
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You fucking emotional queer. Yes, I do know your homosexual.
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04-03-05, 02:21 PM | #6 | |
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doomsday ur sig is fuckin retarded about the pope...man u r dumb the kkk strings up catholics the same as they do to blacks
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04-03-05, 02:32 PM | #7 | |||
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The sig is dope. The KKK should string up you. |
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04-03-05, 02:24 PM | #8 | |
Skadoosh!
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alright poem...............shud put it in the poetry section for proper feedback and shit
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04-03-05, 07:35 PM | #9 | |
Middle Weight
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redbull who told u to get off my nuts?..now get bak on
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