Its not as logn as it looks.. i just sepereated the graphs a bit for a easier read..
I've got a third verse being worked on probly.. Not sure yet.

[Verse1]
It's mere intellect - My spheres so intricate - i intersept - The message sent - through the internet - No disrespect - But its mere purplex - that i live to guess - the innactive set of Mindless Tec - Timeless sets - I scheme spineless mess of blind concepts - I must confess - That illness leaves my mind so drenched -

In the modest meant - Of my minds complex - Times concept - left mindless and - distorted with rhymes of phlem - Lies within , leave you dieing from rivaled sin - i rival phlem - With biles of mightless strength - Mindless kid -

I'm used to spark'n illness, in chat messages - Distorting frames - and depict exact nexus's - My right hand leaves the axis pithed - into a state of a timeless spin - Nexus densed - Exact message sent - To leave silenced pithed - and the atlis mithed. - I'm massive kid - My gifts active meant - Was Gods Accident

[Chorus]
I'm an atheist - But still praise to gods.. for these flaming spits - So ancient with - This blaitent pen - That its inc depicts - A grain of phlem - No matter, Life or text - I stay
purplex - with this brain within -

[Verse2]
So ill - That even in "circles" i'm known to Angle Men - Single them - I'm untouched - Like prisoned men in fictioned hymns - Invision this - An incisioned script - thats read through but still depicts an ill inscript - It's illness kid - Purness tends - To gill attempts - with realness swift - though ill invents -

Still intend - to spill intense - from liquids meant - of these gills intent - Such fluent width - I skill the winds - Wit brilliant scripts - more whetted meants - then pyrimids - You hearing this? - I'm so pure - Virulents couldnt kill these mysts - Feel me kid?

My Brains intact - Spit rain exact - I've left more "frames in laps" - And "brains in wraps" - Then "finished domes" once they've "came abstract" - Insanely clap - With Dangerous Raps - I'm mangle'n cats - An Ancient black - Mixed with Anglo Lat - Exchange'n facts - aint no changing that - With raigan facts - I spit rage in raps - Decaying cats - Mere attempts - to peek famous stats - Tameless "match" - With "flames" in "mass" - A dangerous cat - Who's got the language maxed - With saned vocab? -Its illness black - My styles so "dope" - I have you "Paler" then "Cocaine in Sacks" -

"chk-a chk-a slim shady!"

no umm... dawg... this was tight for the mutlies and rhymes and i think there was flow and meaning i just couldn't cut through all the "-" dashes... but its koo, i liked this kinda sorta and a half, props... peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

i think it was tight keep spittin

__________________
"Streets like a bullet in cancer, it'll swallow you up
or eat you from the inside and hollow you up."- Beanie Sigel

"Stare gun in face
heart flutters dawg it's startin to race
stuck in my place
nowhere to turn, nowhere to go
death right around the corner soon as the gauge exsplode"- Me

thanks for the luv...uppn

Ya, this had good vocab and multis

Not much of a point to it

But good overall

Peace

eat a dick^^^lol

are yall crazy? to tell tha truth dawg i wasnt really feelin it...to me it wuz a paragraph of rhymes...no flow...no rythm...and you need a dictionary son...cuz if you gonna use dem big wordz...you need ta spell em right...it looks nice on paper...but i dare any of yall ta spit that to a beat...1

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gimme ur email

I want you to rap that EXACT keystyle, same wordz no more no less...if you think you can do it...Corvette_Kid_69@hotmail.com...if not dont send it...1