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04-07-05, 10:47 PM
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L.E
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"Escape" Featuring Carson Jet
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/l...ioncanmusic.htm 1st Verse- Limited Edition Hook- Limited Edition 2nd Verse- Carson Jet 3rd Verse- Limited Edition Links... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2073519 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2073524 |
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04-07-05, 11:28 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Listening to it right now..
Verse1 The intro is kind of weak, you should come a little stronger to get ppl sorta hyphed.. Your flow is good but off at some places..and sometimes your eating your words alittle.. Chorus: Okay,but not that good... Verse 2: Carson, you got a pretty nice voice, different from alot like calmity... but your mic is way to quiet.. your lyrics is sorta simple, but its iight i guess... the verse is also sorta short, but just like L.E., your flow is sorta off.. Chorus: Same.. Verse 3: At the end you sorta seem kind of dead man.. lyrics is same.. Improvments to work on: Both of ya verses seem sorta dead, ya sound like you talking, and not showing any emotion.. thats wut most cats got to improve on as well.. so, so far work on that, and also try to think of a better chorus you know.. 7/10
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04-08-05, 07:19 AM
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Evolution
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*listenin*
first verse is goodf... floq is pretty good but it is off in some parts but nothing bad... lyrics are good full of meaining full words... quality is decent man... nice first verse... chorus is alryyt but i aint really feelin it that much.... second verse carson pretty good man i was feelin the beginin bit before u kick in to your verse man it was good, it does seem you a little quiet on that but o well... u cant really help tht lol... chorus agen lol... same as before, third verse is kinda short isnt it? o welllol it was alryyt flow is nver off really its just here and there.. i like this bit where the gun goes off and then the chorus kicks in... haha i like this beat its dope man keep droppin em |
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04-08-05, 02:35 PM
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L.E
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Thanks all...uppin' for some more feedback...
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04-08-05, 08:29 PM
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...Belong...
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Listening on lo-fi: Beat sounds nice...1st verse...flow good quality is nice...rhyming is good...lyrics are straight some deepness in there...Carson now...ya got good lyrics flows aight...jus the vocals man they ain't my fav type of vocal sound...but meh...song is good overall keep droppin peoples...RTF
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