Battle Rules:

10-Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
gotta admit the noob was persistent and annoyin
with his PM'S ....you remind me of cali................

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-09-05 at 03:59 AM

Must drop verse in 240 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. drop 10 bars instead of 10 lines

REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 03:48 AM.

¤ÐÅž¤ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 03:51 AM.

persistence is tha key, what Red annoying you kid//
scared ta tha fact thata newbie will be responsible fa destroyin you kid//1

this nigga is clappin wit mah reaction, yea this nigga is packin//
you simply be lackin satisfaction once mah rhymes be attackin//2

put it together, I'll leave spread apart like puzzles and hoes//
you accepted tha battle, I'm jus tha trouble you chose//3

I'll leave you exposed, viewing ya body like ya one of tha pope's//
climbin tha ladder while you struggle at tha end of ya rope//4

RedZone be tha name, it's pain when bodies droppin like rain//
Daz can get it too, pussy couldn't even get in tha way of stoppin mah gain//5

yea you postin ta death, soon I'll roast you ta death//
nuthin left but a bloody mess gun crackin keep tha witnesses deaf//6

really homie this newbie hard, ask ya conscience tha question//
you should be seen respectin this KING thas a valuable lesson//7

c'mon cuz Imma G so wisely handle ya choosin//
mah thesis sentence murdaz ya topic, watch me complete ya conclusion//8

while I'm improvin, all ya sucka is movin and losin//
desert eagle allow me that shootin while you run fa regroupin//9

I'll leave ya brain slidin down ya throwback, might as well spray ya man nigga//
It's RedZone you'll (R)est (I)n (P)eace when I say you can nigga//10

__________________

i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

this was ok for a noob (i'm aware i'm a noob to) but the flow was off and u werent throwin anu punches...more self -glorifiyin then battle

__________________

he said he was'nt a noob...i wish ya'll wouldnt lie to yaselves
i told ya i didnt wanna merk ya man....oh n you dropped 20 lines
not 10.....so basically you lost as soon as you posted...no beef
you'll get better with tyme, just gotta earn how to construct punches..

__________________

i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

once I get tha hang of yall rules I'll find ya again

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

daz took this one hands down. better punches and shit, and nice wordplay. bUT, i gave u tha vote because yo multies killed his whole verse and any attempt he tried to use. Red Zone, your verse seemed a lil poorly flowed, and simple. U didnt come hard wit tha punches or anything else of that matter. Daz took this one hands down...

RTF(DONE)

And, That was a weak ass battle, I underrated him, and It worked out fine.lol...


-peace

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Handle ya own? nah, couldn’t match my text if it was my thread ya cloned
Ya should be head-in-home, cuz ya lines aint connectin like dead-cellphones
You spittin retarted? Slow? or are you just repeatin what the dumb havta say
I hate preyin(pray)on the(week)weak but worship is monday through son-day

vs

Nothing...
...basically a one-sided vote, ¤ÐÅž¤ just had harder punches,
a good flow, structure was okay, and the vocab was aight...

REDZONE...
...basically you need to fix your structure, get rid of the
brackets ( // ), don't number it, cuz half of RV aint stupid,
make some harder punches & add personas up in there, but
all i have to tell you is that elevate more...

RTF ¤ÐÅž¤...
...on one of my battles

__________________

..The Council..
7 Day Theory