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Old 04-09-05, 10:48 PM   #1
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Broken
Smashed
Shattered
Cracked
Damaged
Tortured
Tormented
Wretched
Betrayed
Ignored
Abandoned


I was all these thing until I
Killed the old weaker me and
Evolved into myself……………
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Old 04-10-05, 12:56 AM   #2
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this was simple yet elegant in many ways i liked it for being so simple...nice
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Old 04-10-05, 07:22 PM   #3
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wow, i never seen a poem like this! (LoL) simple but I like it..

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Old 04-10-05, 07:50 PM   #4
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