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The Secret Language of Ordinary Objects
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You might say that when you walk into your house one day that the lights that were flashing on and off were just mere coincidence That when your door bell rings at 5 a.m and theirs no one outside, it’s only bad circuiting Or when the volume on your computer, on your t.v. or on your stereo just fluctuate because of the uneven dispersion of electricity Some might say that all the objects in your household have a secret language that you can't hear, and they're all just playing tricks on you But I say they're just trying to be noticed. Or maybe they just want you to see that just because you don’t see them moving,breathing, making, saying, or thinking.......doesn't necessarily mean that they aren't. That they aren’t just as important as you or i That they are just doing their job in life like we we: are created into this life, then are sculpted into utensils in order to make this earth go round and round every day. Until there is no use for us anymore we: are all just ordinary everyday objects.
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dope....liked the concept, not as much emotion as some of your other pieces though....but still had a strong message and makes you ponder....good job man....keep up....../join my crew
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i liked this your style here was like mine dope drop ...nice imagery....do you listen to songs while writing?
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Not for this peice. On this occasion I was on mushrooms, and my whole trip revolved around a bunch of different experiences with different common objects....it seemed like they were living, and trying to show me something... I realized this earlier on, but not in such a bright light as I did on this trip.
But yea, for the most part i listen to music while I write....usually music without any words.
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i really liked this drop. da idea was great, good job
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Light Weight
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hey now! I hate it when ppl speek for me! UGH! lol, yeah man, great drop!
check out my work and leave me some feed-back! Sweft
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The Original Half Ass King
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This piece was so original.
Have yet to see anything like it. I thought it made a hard impact in the sense of your diction, and just how you worded it. Great formatting as well. I just feel this was such a clever verse, really makes you think about it. Great job, cant wait to peep your next poetic script... ![]() |
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the medicine man
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dope as shit
original concept to this one make the sequel when ordinary objects attack: they're just lonely... |
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