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08-04-02, 03:40 PM
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Madness and tears
IP:
yall sleep too much!!!
Last edited by KoMpLeX : 08-06-02 at 09:04 PM. |
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08-05-02, 04:07 AM
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this piece looked at tho it had some deepness to it...basic flow structure tho...keep workin on it..much luv..God bless..1..
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08-05-02, 04:16 AM
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this kinda has the same mood as my peice 'corruptions to dessperation' and since i just finished writting the peice, i really feel this. the mood has a perfect setting. your wordplay and imagey really got your opnion out. short but top notch stuff.
stay up, joey |
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08-05-02, 04:31 AM
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that was a nice spit ...a little basicbut had a strong message.....
where the hell is berthoud at???????im used to live in brighton westminster and denver.... |
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08-05-02, 12:50 PM
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thanx for tha replies ya i rusehed this one a lil bit i drop one that i actually take time on n a lil bit.....^^^^berthoud is up by fort collins,loveland and greely area if u know where those towns are....peaz 1
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08-05-02, 01:05 PM
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i like dat spit dawg.....it was tight...it made you actually pictured everything you said in da rhyme....
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