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Check in by: 04-22-05 at 09:49 PM

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BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 09:20 PM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 09:22 PM.

Yo...

I'ma crush this kid, gangsta? Please, you're nothing bitch!
I'm "so hot like stove tops" you "couldn't touch me with oven mits"
I'm grippin' the iron, the trey'll speak, make this faker cease
Then watch this hater "sink" like a "kitchen appliance"
This man's game's hollow, and it can't stop me dawg
But I will "pop your top" like a "champagne bottle!"
You a lame emcee, know better than to play with me
Because ya rhymes "don't make cents" like "broken change machines"


Meh...key'd...8 lines...G'luck man

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Quick spit..

Called me out in my own thread,but only if "im not scared"??..*
Bitch you gonna get it now,cuz like the SAS,im always prepared!!

Ima "shatter" your record, like a brick through glass..**
Called me out like a gansta, but still show no class!!

My punches hit you full in the face, yours barely connect..***
Takes more than battlin 5 newbies......to gain my respect!!

Your magik like a magician so u make me see things..****
That jus fake shit, kinda like the skill you bring!!

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* said accept unless im scared
** break his unbeaten record
*** 5 wins against newbies
**** played off MAJIK

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Nice personals...Uppin to get some votes on this motherfucka!!!!

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NICE DROP, GOOD LUCK

no hate ye. .

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Daubs MySpace

weerd...no hate man...G'l.........................

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Uppin for some fuckin votes.......................

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

I was feelin black magik on this one I liked his punches better.
They were more creative and hit harder. Daubs u need to elevate a little bit man. Magik won this for his flow and punches and wordplay, but Daubs got him in personals. However, my vote goes to BM

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Ok...thanx for the vote...Uppin for more!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Daubs

okaaay...
black? ya opener was of any irrevlivence????...i dont ever see Daubs sayin' he ''gangsta''...
an the oven mits may have been ILL AS FUCK in ah freestyle, but it was more of ah self glory thing from you...so the opener conerning personals an disses, was not the strongest Black..

after the topener, i failed ta see the lines connecting???
there was no real flow, an half the time yo' shit didnt even rhyme....you stayed on how HE CANT BEAT YOU, An uppin yourself...concentrate more on personals, an making him look stupid, not biggin yourself...ya feel black?

Daubs:
first things first homeboy....dont seperate ya bars like that, shit looks uggglllyyy...
buit Daubs, ya had more creativity ta offer, punches could be improved, an the wordplay some what also...like the closer, ya builded it up real nice with the magaician line, then ya had like 5 words ta finish it off...just try using your ideas for punches an personals more effectively...

but still....ya stayed on topic, ya stayed with consistantly dissing black, you used personals (even if the opener seemed a little forced) you still had the better verse on the whole...creativity, personals....an actually stayin dissing your oppenent an not biggin yourself

vote/ Daubs

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Voted For: Daubs

I'ma crush this kid, gangsta? Please, you're nothing bitch!
I'm "so hot like stove tops" you "couldn't touch me with oven mits"
6...gud opener, but u gotta be more creative with them "HOT" lines cuz they are getting played!!
I'm grippin' the iron, the trey'll speak, make this faker cease
Then watch this hater "sink" like a "kitchen appliance"
0...ok. NO! this didnt even rhyme!!
This man's game's hollow, and it can't stop me dawg
But I will "pop your top" like a "champagne bottle!"
0...NO!NO!NO! didn't rhyme again...if anyone votes for you they are pure dickriders!!
You a lame emcee, know better than to play with me
Because ya rhymes "don't make cents" like "broken change machines"
6...been done before but still gud!!

OVERALL: 12/40


Called me out in my own thread,but only if "im not scared"??..*
Bitch you gonna get it now,cuz like the SAS,im always prepared!!
7...yea bitch!! SAS!! i'm english so i get that line!!
Ima "shatter" your record, like a brick through glass..**
Called me out like a gansta, but still show no class!!
5...not feelin it, i already done that brick thru glass line to...shits gotta be done right!!
My punches hit you full in the face, yours barely connect..***
Takes more than battlin 5 newbies......to gain my respect!!
6...aight personal!!
Your magik like a magician so u make me see things..****
That jus fake shit, kinda like the skill you bring!!
5...weak closer!!! magic shit is played!!

OVERALL: 23/40

aight check it...........daubs gets this cuz he had a couple of decent punches...a couple were weak but black magik was wack.....two of his bars didnt even fuckin rhyme so daubs gets this for a far better verse.

V/ - Daubs

return the fave..........links are in my siggy!!!!

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Voted For: Daubs

ight close battle... daubs thisa is decent for your first battle good job man imma break it down...

Daubs

Called me out in my own thread,but only if "im not scared"??..*
Bitch you gonna get it now,cuz like the SAS,im always prepared!!
alryyt opener.. no punch really
Ima "shatter" your record, like a brick through glass..**
Called me out like a gansta, but still show no class!!
alryyt couldav been worded better
My punches hit you full in the face, yours barely connect..***
Takes more than battlin 5 newbies......to gain my respect!!
nicee personal decent punch here aswel
Your magik like a magician so u make me see things..****
That jus fake shit, kinda like the skill you bring!!
another nice line pklayed of his name decent closure

ight daubs overall i thought you had some decent shit in ther and some played shit i felt you had no piunches becuz u were more interested in finding the rhye... no biggi though good verse 15/20

Magik

I'ma crush this kid, gangsta? Please, you're nothing bitch!
I'm "so hot like stove tops" you "couldn't touch me with oven mits"
^^ not a very good opener self gloryfication
I'm grippin' the iron, the trey'll speak, make this faker cease
Then watch this hater "sink" like a "kitchen appliance"
^^ nice wordplay but it doesnt rhyme
This man's game's hollow, and it can't stop me dawg
But I will "pop your top" like a "champagne bottle!"
^^ alryyt couldav been wordfed better
You a lame emcee, know better than to play with me
Because ya rhymes "don't make cents" like "broken change machines"
^^ nicee decent closure and a decent punch

ight man u have potential keep doing your thing n u will get somwhere but some of your lines didnt rhyme n u had a self glorification in there which isnt good in a battle... you had a couple of decent punches in there

v/ daubs becuz he had punches and more personals magik only had punches and half his shit didnt rhyme rlly...

rtf on my battle wit U.T.A link is in the sig pz....

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Lmao...how can you say the shit doesnt rhyme?

I'm -GRIPPIN THE IRON- the trey'll speak, make this faker cease
Then watch this hater "sink" like a "-KITCHEN APPLIANCE-"

kitchen appliance and grippin the iron rhyme...

This -MANS GAMES HOLLOW- and it cant stop me dawg
but I will 'pop your top' like a -CHAMPAGNE BOTTLE-

Look at the shit that is capitalized...y'all were just reading it wrong...Uppin for some fuckin votes

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