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Old 05-05-05, 11:14 AM   #1
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u betta....... * lyricalmatermind= warning*

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u beat me with a no-show and u dont wanna rematch the battle,

so this is ya warning....

Ayo,
My flows clean.. serving these kids with wording, perfect..
announcin Wars on Stars, and Skywalkin on ya earthly surface..
u still learnin the scripts.. i've studied & majored..
& after all the times i've killed u, by now, u must be indangered..
readers, loving the flavor.. no denying, aint worth to argue..
I bring the verse to charr dude, with the words to scar you..
i'm cursed n harmful.. flow will serve n starve you..
Aint seen u in a while doggy, ur show was dope, I was lovin it
I always wondered where that dude from NY Undercover went
That widows peak is wack, barber had some shitty cutters
Cuz u lookin like the latino version of Eddie Munster
& kid u so yellow u could blend in against the wall
Plus it must be hard as fuck to blink..
..when ur eyebrows r 7 inches tall

lips like blastin 4, beef i aint ask for it thou..
but
MAN UP AND LETS DO THIS THE RIGHT WAY I AINT NO AVERAGE JOE.....
* from the show*

lyricalmatermind lets do this 16 lines come with it....
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Old 05-05-05, 11:23 AM   #2
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damn...structure was ass but still a nice read...come tryout for tha lunatiks if u wanna be in a crew...peep my shit "gettin attention"...1
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Old 05-06-05, 11:48 AM   #3
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upp'in for more replys...
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Old 05-06-05, 01:11 PM   #4
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y flows clean.. serving these kids with wording, perfect..
announcin Wars on Stars, and Skywalkin on ya earthly surface..
that was pure dopeness homie good drop...............
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Old 05-07-05, 10:06 AM   #5
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thanks for u'r feed back....

upp'in for more feed back plez...
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DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME *

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whos next!!

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Old 05-07-05, 07:48 PM   #6
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aiight this was hot...gettin at my homie Lyrical but at least it was good...maybe he doesntave credits to battle...he battles a lot lol...anyway rtf on the long OM in my sig..9/10
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Old 05-08-05, 04:02 AM   #7
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thanks alot for ya feed back nah i dont have beef just want a proper battle u feel me?
thanks again upp'in
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Old 05-08-05, 12:06 PM   #8
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I thought it was good the flow was really good, I think that it will sound good in audio with a hot beat.
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