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Evolution 5 55.56%
Bonecollector 4 44.44%
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Old 05-07-05, 09:36 PM   #1
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Bonecollector vs Evolution

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Old 05-07-05, 09:41 PM   #2
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Old 05-07-05, 09:58 PM   #3
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Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-05 09:58 PM.
 
Old 05-07-05, 10:06 PM   #4
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bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need to for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit

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Old 05-07-05, 10:07 PM   #5
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bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit

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Old 05-07-05, 10:18 PM   #6
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Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
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Old 05-07-05, 10:19 PM   #7
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..whose ^Lucifier^ ?? ...cuz that isnt me..good drop anywayz
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Old 05-07-05, 10:30 PM   #8
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BONE punches were on target and hit well....flow was good i liked how it flowed in this specific verse...structure was also good and a bit diff but easie to read....vocab was ight not your best but okay...

evoloution...punches didnt hit very well sum did but sum were just fillers..flow was ight basic but good...structure was ight too nuthin speacial but enough..vocab was off too simple and your verse just didnt hit him like he hit you good drop both yall though but bone getz this IMO RETURN THA FAVOUR ON ANY OF MY OPEN BATLES

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Old 05-07-05, 10:31 PM   #9
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bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
5...mah man, aint feelin this, just filler!!
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
5...nice punch but cud be better!!
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
6...LoL!!! gud meta in there!!
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
6...gud shit again!!!!
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
5...not feelin the closer, too played!!

OVERALL: 27/60



Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
6...gud play off his name!!!
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
6...first line filler, 2nd line was a gud meta tho!!
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
5...not feelin it!!!
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
4...BOOOO!!! that is self - g shit!!!
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
5...filler, not really feelin it!!!

OVERALL: 26/60


both came pretty weak...close one to call but i'm gonna have to go with Evolution because Bone dropped a self-g line in his verse and they are more played than video games!!!

V/ - Evolution

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Old 05-07-05, 11:53 PM   #10
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Voted For: Bonecollector

Aight Check It..

Bonecollecor: Hottest Line

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...

Evolution: Hottest Line

rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved

Overall: I Would Give This Battle To Bonecollector For The Simple Fact That His Wording Had The Concepts and Devlievry A Battle Vesrse Should Have. He Had Better Punches and Personals.

Evolution, Just Work On Wording...Your Hottest Line Could've Beat His Whole Verse If You Woulda Worded It Better. Use More of A Metaphor.

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Old 05-08-05, 12:07 AM   #11
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Yo this wuz some weak shit.......on da real thoe....both cats need to work on Punchlines instead claimin how ur flow or lyrics or ability is da best........but yo Evolution wuz juss plain wack and Bone collector at least had some decent punches so i vote him............

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Old 05-08-05, 12:08 AM   #12
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bone..u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
alright 6.5/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
koo..... 7.3/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. &
starved
Hot 8.1/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
bad 4.3
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck
that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
funny ass shit 8.5/10

overall: 34.7/50

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
bad 4.0/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
alright 5.0/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
ok... 5.0/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
really bad 4.0/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
ok 5.0/10

23/50
V/Evolution

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Old 05-08-05, 12:41 AM   #13
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Voted For: Evolution

bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
Eh....4/10
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
Not bad...5/10
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
Liked this punch...7/10
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
Pretty funny...6/10
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
Nice...7/10

Overall: 29/50


Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
Eh...4/10
....Untouchable huh?...
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
Nah....4/10
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
Eh...5/10
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
Wack....3/10
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
Gay punch....3/10

Overall: 19/50

His verse was just better so...
Vote: Evolution

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Old 05-08-05, 12:42 AM   #14
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bone got this super easy ...... look'n Z@ p-olls ..
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Old 05-08-05, 12:52 AM   #15
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clooose battle...

BC- You had a coupla lines I liked... that soap bubble ish was aiite... and the maryjane shit was nice... The rest was pretty simplistic but slightly effective... such as food chain and hardly hit...

Ev- you had a coupla lines I liked... money where mouth is... and the 2 hour joint... the rest sorta fell flat... pick wack or played was coo... both y'allh ad pretty good structure and flow...

Imma give this the Bone off the strength of like one line.... just felt he came slighhhtly more creative with his.... close one...


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