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Topic:Wordz Of Wisdom



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Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 10:52 PM.

First Topical Battle.....
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Its the Wordz Of Wisdom I Speak,Its Straight Honesty That Gainz Fame
"Stay Up On Ya Feet",Cuz Once your Down You Cant Maintain
Couple Of Wordz Could Change Ya Life,Due To The Way Their Excepted
but Alwayz Think Postive,N You Will Alwayz Be Respected
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In a Blink Of an Eye People Dyin Without A Trace
Sorrow Fillin The Air,But To Most People Just Another Missin Case
Wordz Of Wisdom Shall Heal Ya Mind,Let The Wordz Fill Your Thought
Let All The Good Things Remain,N Let All Evil Things Go To Rot
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Succeed To Do As So,Ur Self Esteem Shall React In Loss Of Grief
But Feel The Drain Of Pain,As Your Body Replies With Relief
Still In Remembrance Of Da Past,What You Left Behind Shall Not Be Mentioned
Only Speak Whats Good For Da Future,N You Will Be Noticed With great Attention
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Open Ya Eyez n see Whatcha Accomplished,N See Where youve Been Placed
Dont Look Into the Past,You'll be Astonished Of Whatcha Faced
So Just Sit Back N Enjoy -Life- While It Remainz On Earths Surface
No Turnin Back Now,If You Do Whats your Purpose!

(First Topical Battle Verse)!

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mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 06:36 PM.

Trees swaying, I watch as the park is a host to children playing
Listening intently, in awe at every word my mother is saying
Praying that I’ll remember it later, but all I can hear is laughter
Hoping there’ll be a translation when she tells it to me after

She slips her hand inside mine, and I squeeze her hand tight
Igniting a bond between us something only we could alight
I turn for a second to glance at her face, its so full of glory
Words of wisdom, she utters…dear now , listen to my story

A mothers story

An area with inviting open spaces including a variety of races
A district so close that everyone memorised each others faces
Paces so fast, that children were having children, it was crazy
Youngsters, of just twelve smoking stuff to make them hazy

I got caught up in this world of lies and deceit, street crime
Miming lyrics to songs that had meaning, writing rhymes
My momma use to preach knowledge, that I used to shun
Telling me the same words Ima tell you, never do as I done

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I look up from my baby carriage my eyes wide and so bright
Momma strokes my face gently, I open my mouth in delight
She tells me one day, I’ll fulfil all the dreams she’s planned
I smile gracefully, an effort to portray that I understand……….

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