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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 06:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:39 PM.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:48 PM.

i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself

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Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''

Fender = A Model Of A Guitar

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Letz Get Sum Voters On Diz Hot Battle Cha'll, We Will Return Da Vote

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viewin poles... nice battle boys............................

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Hey Can We Get Sum Voterz On Diz Battle Peoplez???

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uppin this shit

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Yo, Holla At Diz Battle Rite Here...Diz Iz Fiyah Fo Yall

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vote on this shit.. seriously

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Voted For: Skriptz

Aight I'm Lazy...So I'ma Jus Do It Real Simple...Dont Take Da Vote Away...It'll Still Be Explained...

PUNCHES: Skriptz...Both Used Em, His Were More Effective
PERSONALS: Skriptz...Khaoz Really Didnt Have 2 Many...
CREATIVITY Khaoz...Khoaz Verse Had More Thought...Lines Were More Clever
FLOW/STRUCTURE: Skriptz...Just Take A Look At Da Verse...Both Went Off At Points But Khaoz Was More A Lil More Off
WORDPLAY: Both...Both Niggas Used Wordplay In Da Same Way, No One Stood Out In Dis Category

OPENER: Khaoz
MIDDLE: Skriptz
CLOSER: Skriptz

"I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself"

OVERALL VOTE: Skriptz

Tight Battle...RTF...$cream At Me

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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uppin this shit

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Voted For: Skriptz


Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
Eh ok 6/10
HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
Good attemp of a punch line but didn’t hit hard 6/10
Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
Wack 3/10
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
Iight good 7/10
Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
Eh 6/10

Overall: 28/50


i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
Good punch line and openor 8/10
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
Nice 7/10
There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
Eh okay 6/10
Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
Eh 5/10
I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
Iight good closer 6/10

Overall: 32/50

v/ skript for just a better verse

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