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Old 05-30-05, 01:03 AM   #1
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Remember The Days...

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Wuddup YaLL...I'm Back!!!..Chea..Anyway..I'm Puttin Up This Track Again, Cauz i Felt I Needed More Response On It..After Enuff Responses, I'll Put Up My Newest Track..Anyway, This is a Track I Did On a Nas Beat...I'm Basically Talkin Bout Most of My Past...Hope Yall Enjoy..E z..

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Hi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2386870&q=Hi

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192930


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Old 05-30-05, 01:32 AM   #2
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alright peepin this out now....beat is fire.....of course...

Beat:9/10
Flow:8/10
Lyrics:8/10
Voice:8/10

Overall:8.5/10

Overall first hafl is tight fam..keep this shit up...hook is cool...u got this on lock right now..good shit fam
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Old 05-30-05, 01:34 AM   #3
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Preciate It..And Good Lookin Out L. Flows..Preciate It Fam...E z..
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Old 05-30-05, 06:27 PM   #4
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Uppin...Holla...
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Old 05-30-05, 06:33 PM   #5
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I like this beat......your quality is pretty good too. I really think that you need to put a little emotion into your shit. A lot of people already think you're already tight, but if you would just spit your shit instead of having a monotone voice, you would be dope as hell. Honestly
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Old 05-30-05, 06:58 PM   #6
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daymm the beats mad nice, ya flow was straight on point most of the part, ya lyrics came out pretty hot nice story tellin, quality was straight, hook was nice as hell.. overall id give this an 8.5/10

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Old 05-31-05, 04:16 PM   #7
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This is nice..catchy hook..flow is nice again..beat is nice...

I felt the story especially the one about ya pops i go thru the same shit
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Old 06-01-05, 02:24 AM   #8
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Thanks Fam..Lifes a Bitch huh...Preciate da Feed Anywayz..
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Old 06-01-05, 02:52 AM   #9
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beat flow and emotions fitted kinda felt of at times but overall nice track sonny
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Old 06-02-05, 01:07 AM   #10
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Old 06-02-05, 10:01 AM   #11
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Aight.. The Beat is sick, Loving it.. Yah Lyrics and flow are tight, Good Job wit that, Quality is good as well, Yah presence on the mic is lacking a bit, Gotta really Put Yah heart and soul into the words, But i love the hoook man.. You tight,Just gotta fine toon some things.. Keep that shit up..
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Old 06-02-05, 04:08 PM   #12
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Yeauh...Preciate Da Feed..
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Old 06-05-05, 08:52 PM   #13
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Uppin...More Feed Yall..
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Old 06-07-05, 07:31 PM   #14
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what up Ak this beat is real laid back i can see myself remembering good memories to this beat....ok first verse sets the track up nicely shit is nice flow is on point,presence and all that is solid...hook is real dope and fits the track nicely....second verse is consistent shit stays solid through out....this is a hot track fam nice work 8/10 no doubt.1.
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Old 06-12-05, 07:10 PM   #15
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