I was talking to Pro on AIM and we just decided to key some shit up.. Check it..

Mimesis

Rackin wins, number one.. shit yo, these kids are wack but son..
Im done holding back.. and my trips to the chiropracter are done
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Runnin shit.. gunnin kids.. gay faggots actin like i wont rip a dude
I seperate the boys from the men..
..but I got time to merk you bitches too
Flippin fools like its nothin.. while you stick laughin and slap balls
Shit.. you fags let dudes compass on you.. with no map involved
A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either
Juse see though, I'm plain ill, while you stay stuck in the suckness
Fags, I'm Pro-pain.. why else you think we're fucking you up kids?

Propain

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners
I tell no lies, go else where to Learn The Fables
And I resemble DJs, the way I Turn-The-Tables
Leaving Hoes Scared, bring the heat to ya street when I Blow Flares
And like professional nudists you aint going No-Wear
I Drop Cats when I cock back and Pop Gats
And easily put a Verse between the both of us like Mortal Kombat
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Taking in flames, man Im fucking Heat Absorbing
Drop hot shit than take a bow like I was Eating Organs

I don't know what the link rules are in this forum, so I'll just post some up..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193889
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192345

Word, Aight uppin for some good feeback on this shit.

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Cmon people..SMH.

Give me some fucking feedback!

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Nice punches, especially for being keyed, both had some nice shit but a couple of played concepts too.

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Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners

that was a nice ass line son....shit stood out from both verses....nice shit Mimesis....stay up

Word..thanks for the feedback man.

Uppin for some more feed

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....... lol you guys are illy yo

You best believe, son.

definately worth the read, lol

funny stuff, mims first two lines made me chuckle out loud, propain had some good ones too

too lazy to leave good feed right now though

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Haha.. Appreciate it yo.

Uppin for more feedback.

shit was hot shit was crazy nice punches feeling this thought about it then i said to my-self i might need one or 2 of them punches so i aint........


shit iis crazy thou....... 8/10

^^didnt understand what you were gettin at kon...lol
need their punches..?..?
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this was short but worth the read, good concepts from both
nice to see ya still got it mim, n propain neva heard of ya but
perdy good shit........

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

I think this was worth the read...a good drop...punches were HOT ....propain and mimesis...good stuff...cant be mad at this one it had a purpose and it did jus tht and a lil bit mo lol holla....RTF to my "Let Loose" track link in sig

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I saw some nice punches in there...def feelin it.. favorite lines:

A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners

can you return the favor?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194203