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Old 06-11-05, 05:40 AM   #1
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Translation

Tansforming ancient preachings into academic teachings
Reaching intellectually into an abyss of the unknown
Analysing emotions in times of catastrophic commotions
Never quite capturing the full meaning in the language
Simply going for simplicity, not understanding the full challenge
Lessening what might have been to what we believe it is
As human minds, cant tracvel back in time, to understand lines from behind
Till time travel, the true theorisms,tasks, lay tame
Infinite will hold the feeling written behind anno domini scripture
Orchaestrating the mystery of biblical pictures
Nevertheless, its because translation is nothing but what a translator interprets
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Old 06-13-05, 04:22 AM   #2
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bump..............
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Old 06-13-05, 10:55 PM   #3
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WOW i was definitely feeling this piece.. this is one of my favorite poem structures.. and it just seems to hit soo hard.. soo much emotion put into one little piece.. good job
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Old 06-15-05, 06:41 PM   #4
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This was good,liked the structure and they way you did the letters, i thought though, that this piece could have been longer, but it was a creative concept to write about and your vocab is good here.keep dropping.1
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Old 06-17-05, 10:41 AM   #5
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thanks yo.........
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