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06-11-05, 02:11 PM
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Tweety vs Black Queen
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The Establishment vs Livin' Legendz Topical Battle Topic: Stranded In The Middle Of The Ocean 15 - 30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes No D/R Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 06-14-05 at 02:11 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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06-12-05, 09:27 AM
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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-12-05 09:27 AM.
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06-13-05, 11:37 PM
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Tweety has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 11:37 PM.
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06-14-05, 09:23 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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Meh.........................Let me key my shit up.............
-Tweety.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-15-05, 12:56 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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Diary page 1..... I can feel the blood dripping on my back with the pain similar to a bee My body Shivers. My lips are chap, vibrating so quivery. Tears leak Getting a head-ache, The images of the hits....The yelling vocals I hear in my ear. Trying to understand why I ran. Still to me its a riddle My feet hurts from pounding on the brown soil, that our hands made My heart beating crazy like an over dose patient, while the sun blaze above me. But my heart is deep cut by the puncture wounds ..Because I left the others behind thee, Hopefully i will see them soon With the agony pain on my back as I lay back on the chair I looked up in the ceiling, with a smile on my face ...............As i smell the ocean air Diary page 6 My Fingers are prune, my expression showing confusion Don’t know where I'm heading, but this is my fate that's been given The taste of the salt water stays in my tongue, I'm so dehydrated Feeling so weak, 4 days without food. *groans* my stomach is knitted My lips are filled with "stains" vomit, it tasted awful when I swallow it I'm desperately trying to stay alive, cause I even swallow my own spits As I write in my diary, the darkness around me, is similar to my Life The Opposite of light is creeping slowly making it's way above me, in the sky I led out a "sigh", As I my head movements goes to left from right Under my voice I led out a whimper sound, stars look upon me as I cry Wind Rushing against me, I can feel the force from it taking me backwards Rain pouring, coursing down my body. The Tough wind is more like a blizzard Feeling so paranoid, Broke down on my knee's the pain in my ribs and my back Arms around my waist, I can feel my bones. I scream hopefully someone can hear that As the boat moves so uncontrollably, I feel so befuddled. "Please god. Help me" In my mind, the saying "Every prayer has an hard obstacle" but I'm here dieing My eyes starts to close, I'm feeling so woozy, then i felt my lungs....cutting out Tears starts to run through my pupil as i heard my heart beating. it’s burning out Put my knee's close to my chest and started breathing in "I'm going crazy" Thinking if i suck the air out of gods creation then I'll live..... ....My theory was wrong As I'm lurking in the shadow of darkness phase *News Reporter* The Coast Guard found this boat in the middle of the ocean, with 1 dead guy in it, We believe he's from Cuba, Were still abuse and hatred are being committed. There was a Paper in his hand...that said "I just wanted freedom, why it got’s to be so far away?".
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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