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06-11-05, 08:15 PM
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Banned: Biting
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*Testament*
IP:
Testament To you alone, I give Those intangible, Inexpressable emotions That a heart may hold; The extremity of faith; The calmness of trust; The beneficent beauty of understanding, And the tenderness of love. Small bits of broken laughter, And the faint, shy whisper of appeal. The unfathomable deeps of desire, And the quietude of peace. Yet these I may not offer Untinged with silent grief, For mingling there With beauty, hope and dreams, Is sorrow. The shadow of her bitterness lies deep, And my needs must give to you Her tears as well. |
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06-12-05, 09:32 AM
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uppin..........
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06-12-05, 03:25 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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im really feeling this
good stuff |
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06-12-05, 06:29 PM
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IP:
thanks uppin...
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06-13-05, 10:56 PM
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Blow Me
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IP:
yeah i liked this.. as i imagined the person reading this.. just laying there heart out.. it was such a good piece and i could really feel it... good job man..
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06-13-05, 11:08 PM
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IP:
thanks.........
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06-14-05, 07:42 PM
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP:
by the time i got to the end of it i wished it was longer ..i really enjoyed this peice. the imagery was there and all. vocab was def there and emotion. i like your style and how you write your poetry |
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06-14-05, 07:50 PM
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IP:
thanks man. .
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06-17-05, 10:23 PM
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everytime i rhyme...
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IP:
imagery is lovely
deep poem liked the read
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I had to get off the boat so i could walk on water RF FOREVA EVA EVA EVA |
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