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Foundation n Adjusment
IP: CBD1 4982
we travel back to the beginning, whites took the roles of blacks and history was re-written....now begins the transition
The Foundation let's reset times clock and flock to the dawn of creation and relive our lives with slight sighs of sized alteration rearranging specification making caucasion glow ebony black the soul emitts darkness, the carcass remains truely intact counteract ethnic artifact undoing godly wounds with acriflavine leaving the ordeal to heal and reveal charcoal like melanin examine the pigmentation, a concatenation of colors occured living free in the mind of a slave, braving elements endured reword the bible, quote each disciple obfuscating their stance to fer-de-lance, hebrew is see-through, the tongue's afrikaans echoing tribal chants begging holy mans to teach and preach us that the new-born baby jesus brewed in the womb a black fetus evolved in that habitus dying for equivelent bibical reasons but altered our life's proceedings like reducing earth's seasons for white europeans were now dominent in the african continent the reciprocal of imperialism, in blacks wealth was prominent popular bibical explanation now shows jesus was a black creation, enslavement for the caucasion, the bright continent there for the black mans taking The Adjustment as previously told, the first verse just set the tone whites reside in africa, europe was the blacks throne living years alone, no conflict,and peace a formality till normality became occupying lands with a cavalary much fatality, survivors with dry sailva turned pawns disposable as condoms,falling to the ground like acorns they marched on,shackled in chains to ships resembling graves back to the present,take a look,now whites are the slaves transported to home of the brave,sewing seeds in alabama the wrong kind of enamor, and bought by a black farmer unexpurgate bad karma, a tarnished mind is worse than battered matter enslavement,grounded like pavement, praying for humane in the latter but this worlds a hammer, ignites and strikes in sequencial blows till your diagnosed as a quelquechose enclosed in a state of decompose want to oppose, so they just juxtapose and mature together re-written for my pleasure, now living how blacks did forever the white man continues to live how black people did before this adjustment, previous ways are unknown, but deja vu is sympathetic and conditions improve. links coming
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IP: CBD1 4982
links- pen n paper, sickseed
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Champion
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IP: 7D75 3ECC
damn homie this was sick.....i dont knw why people are sleepin on this.....yo man deep shit.....however you need some clickable links or it will be closed by a mod if they see it....RTF on my OM - BATTLEFIELD SCARS PLEASSE
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IP: CBD1 4982
thanks
upp this
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IP: 7706 EC2A
wtf
uppin honestly this site sucks ass on feed
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IP: 7706 EC2A
this site is wack
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IP: 7706 EC2A
waCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
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Flyweight
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IP: 3450 F354
llllllllllllllllllllooooooollllllll REPLIES DO CUM QUITE SLOW IN DIS SITE I AGREE
MAN THIS PIECE WOZ ON FIRE.... HMM WHT TO SAY BAD?? DUNNO LOL GUD IMERGRY,FLOWS,CONCEPT,STRUCTURE,VOLVABULARY ...............GIVVIN DIS A 9 ............. WAKE UP PPL N UPP DIS #### ~1~ REPLY TO DIS OPEN MIC........... NEED MOR FEEDBAKS.... TNX.......... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195552 <-- CLIK LINK |
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IP: CBD1 4982
dope thanks ......................
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IP: CBD1 4982
r u serious...this site too wack to feed
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IP: 2D4B F56C
this was a pretty decent drop, best i've seen since i've been here
(which is like a few hours) your concept was creative,lyrics were on point great flow and consistancy in your rhyme scheme, i actually enjoyed this 9/10 propz brotha...keep droppin i wanna see more of your work!!
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IP: CBD1 4982
tahnks man
will return favor soon uppin
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IP: CBD1 4982
no feed...oh yeha
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
ohh shit....everybody from RF comin over here.....we should collab....RF style
this was hot though....the whole concept was raw as fuck....vocab and imagery was iLL....and the way you put it down was tight..... on some serious shit, you should write at HF....Ex went over there....they'll appreciate a drop like this over there..... but, you already know im feeling ya style, mayne.....keep it coming.....
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HAHAHAHAH!..i onno
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IP: 33B8 E096
nice drop man......i like the concept....nice vocab...nice wordplay...dope overall..keep it up..
and hit up.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196785
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