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Old 06-17-05, 10:29 PM   #1
Vick Slate
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we travel back to the beginning, whites took the roles of blacks and history was re-written....now begins the transition

The Foundation

let's reset times clock and flock to the dawn of creation
and relive our lives with slight sighs of sized alteration
rearranging specification making caucasion glow ebony black
the soul emitts darkness, the carcass remains truely intact
counteract ethnic artifact undoing godly wounds with acriflavine
leaving the ordeal to heal and reveal charcoal like melanin
examine the pigmentation, a concatenation of colors occured
living free in the mind of a slave, braving elements endured
reword the bible, quote each disciple obfuscating their stance
to fer-de-lance, hebrew is see-through, the tongue's afrikaans
echoing tribal chants begging holy mans to teach and preach us
that the new-born baby jesus brewed in the womb a black fetus
evolved in that habitus dying for equivelent bibical reasons
but altered our life's proceedings like reducing earth's seasons
for white europeans were now dominent in the african continent
the reciprocal of imperialism, in blacks wealth was prominent


popular bibical explanation now shows jesus was a black creation, enslavement for the caucasion, the bright continent there for the black mans taking

The Adjustment

as previously told, the first verse just set the tone
whites reside in africa, europe was the blacks throne
living years alone, no conflict,and peace a formality
till normality became occupying lands with a cavalary
much fatality, survivors with dry sailva turned pawns
disposable as condoms,falling to the ground like acorns
they marched on,shackled in chains to ships resembling graves
back to the present,take a look,now whites are the slaves
transported to home of the brave,sewing seeds in alabama
the wrong kind of enamor, and bought by a black farmer
unexpurgate bad karma, a tarnished mind is worse than battered matter
enslavement,grounded like pavement, praying for humane in the latter
but this worlds a hammer, ignites and strikes in sequencial blows
till your diagnosed as a quelquechose enclosed in a state of decompose
want to oppose, so they just juxtapose and mature together
re-written for my pleasure, now living how blacks did forever

the white man continues to live how black people did before this adjustment,
previous ways are unknown, but deja vu is sympathetic and conditions improve.


links coming
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Old 06-17-05, 10:39 PM   #2
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links- pen n paper, sickseed
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Old 06-18-05, 04:45 AM   #3
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damn homie this was sick.....i dont knw why people are sleepin on this.....yo man deep shit.....however you need some clickable links or it will be closed by a mod if they see it....RTF on my OM - BATTLEFIELD SCARS PLEASSE
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Old 06-18-05, 11:48 AM   #4
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thanks

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Old 06-18-05, 10:08 PM   #5
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wtf
uppin
honestly this site sucks ass on feed
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Old 06-19-05, 12:56 PM   #6
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this site is wack
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Old 06-19-05, 02:04 PM   #7
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Old 06-19-05, 02:32 PM   #8
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llllllllllllllllllllooooooollllllll REPLIES DO CUM QUITE SLOW IN DIS SITE I AGREE

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Old 06-19-05, 10:00 PM   #9
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dope thanks ......................
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Old 06-20-05, 10:01 PM   #10
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r u serious...this site too wack to feed
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Old 06-20-05, 11:29 PM   #11
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this was a pretty decent drop, best i've seen since i've been here
(which is like a few hours) your concept was creative,lyrics were on point
great flow and consistancy in your rhyme scheme, i actually enjoyed this
9/10 propz brotha...keep droppin i wanna see more of your work!!
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Old 06-23-05, 01:02 PM   #12
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tahnks man

will return favor soon

uppin
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Old 06-25-05, 12:30 PM   #13
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no feed...oh yeha
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Old 06-25-05, 01:19 PM   #14
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ohh shit....everybody from RF comin over here.....we should collab....RF style


this was hot though....the whole concept was raw as fuck....vocab and imagery was iLL....and the way you put it down was tight.....

on some serious shit, you should write at HF....Ex went over there....they'll appreciate a drop like this over there.....

but, you already know im feeling ya style, mayne.....keep it coming.....
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Old 06-25-05, 01:23 PM   #15
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nice drop man......i like the concept....nice vocab...nice wordplay...dope overall..keep it up..

and hit up..

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