i left feed on black magics "forgive me track" and dacuments (400 bars diss track) so heres my cut! lol this was pretty rushed

aight, this is my new mic quality, on my old mic if i didnt add effects it would sound dull, on this mic i didnt have time to mix and it still sounds decent in my oppinion.... but yea this is rapverse.com round 3, only 2 more matches n i get those prizes (300 dollar value) yeaaa! wish me luck!


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/theomen_music.htm

lyrics...
fuckit im up to bat, bustin a mic/
ill putcha heart inside a bucket of ice- im coldhearted/
nuthin is nice, trust you should run for ya life/
duck unda covers n cova ya eyes/
im tha same joka aimed ova flame throwaz/
tha games ova hope ya a brain doner/
tie a noose round ya neck n let tha chain choke ya/
wait till ya face purple, load n let tha gauge blow ya!/
take ya "eyes outcha skull" n hang ya flesh/
setchu wif a "blind date with death" name ya set/
stay calm! im flamin em all with napalm/
a bombs droppin to maime ya'll ya done!/
ya done! never comin back for more/
knock knock tha grim reaperz atcha door/
ima slasher, hackin ya at tha morge/
you dont even know tha half of what i have in store for ya!/
buck! blast! cut n slash!/
lemme run it back! ima bust ya ass!/
crusaidin, ragein toss a grenade and-
my punches go over ya head like golliath, boxin with david/
its contagious, dont even say shit/
i stay sick like tha blood stream of aids patience/
i bring hell to tha beat, smoke a el in tha streets/
you cant pull mah wait like a elephant on pelicans feet/
ill hang ya skeleton neat, on a hanger sittin in place/
pull you out tha closet like admittin ya gay/ (skeletons in tha closet, gays come out)
and you dont really want a problem with me/
cuz ill solve em, come back, callin ya team/
im on toppa tha game, spit alotta tha flame/
like a "runaway pit bull" im "offa tha chain"/
ec dont get caught in my aim/
cuz mah "dogsll put ya vets down" like its "opposite day!"/

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*waves bye to bye to EC*

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lol^ nyce feed...

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i'd wave bue to you aswell acuity but you went out a long time ago....

i liked this omen i was suprised to see that there wasn't alot of punches like the phenom one, flow was dope quality is dope u can tell me some of these effects u do wit ya voice coz it sounds dope... nice diss track man... and g'luck in got skillz

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^yo, if you want to fuck with some effects, i usualy get triple N to do em for me, or diabolic, but i think triple N has more knowledge BECAuse he went to skool for it.. so he knows things taught by proffesors and such... but he did give me this site to look at for it...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101638

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ight man ill get at triple next time he comes on... thanksss

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listening:
beat: incredible
Lyrics: doooppe
Flow: dope as fuck
Quality: yeah pretty dope...
Overall: exellent !

"my dogsll put ya vets down like its opposite day!

Wow

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hahaha..Ofizzle droppin bombs ova baghdad...

well executed

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^word go vote! lol

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by far the best ive heard here so far, but still i think slightly over-rated(not tryna diss or nuthing)

your flow is mostly on point but at times sounds forced and un-comfortable, delivery is nice and energy is raw so cant knock that, this kinda beat is played for a battle though, i think ya voice is dope, also stopping the beat to emphasise punches is played, for abattle i woulda used more punches but each to there own init.

yeah man you pretty nice but as everybody could do with theres room for improvement still.

keep doing ya thing man