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Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-25-05 10:10 PM.

Wall Street has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-25-05 10:11 PM.

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*Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart",
.
**On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear,
Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear,
.
***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed",
we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead,
.
****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan,
and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn,
.
*****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth,
I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth.
.
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*-i was goin off his name wall street, wall-Mart
**-its the truth
***-again the truth
****-Think about it
*****-i was his first friend on RV and he alwase asked me for advise....
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wall ur probly goina win but i just needed to say those things--

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

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Voted For: Wall Street

Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart",
.^^are you serious?
**On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear,
Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear,
.^^^OK
***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed",
we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead,
.^^^OK
****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan,
and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn,
.^^weak
*****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth,
I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth.
^^^wat u talkin bout....that ain't a punch

Yo...ur shit lacked in punches.Ur structure wasn't that good.That last bar could have been a hard hittin punch if you used it better.U just stated shit in ur verse.Where are your wordplay ans metas?

Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig?
Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig
^^ight....but kinda a self glorifing bar
Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me
Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly
^^^LO...Nice
A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up
Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up
^^nah...I dun like this one
And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be
Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry'
^^^OK.....a lil basic though
You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G
Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV*
^^NICE

Well....ur verse was a lil repitive as you constantly went after his name.At times...you were a lil too basic.Ur flow was ight.U structured ur verse nicely.Just next time try not to be so basic.But ya still gettin the win here.

Vote-Wall Street(please vote in link below or this vote will be removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589

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Voted For: Wall Street

*Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart",
decent
**On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear,
Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear,
weak
***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed",
we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead,
okay
****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan,
and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn,
nah[/n]
*****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth,
I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth.
[n]close was okay



Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig?
Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig
coo opener
Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me
Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly
okay
A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up
Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up
weak
And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be
Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry'
decent
You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G
Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV*
decent closer

overall.. solja u could’ve came better than that, cuz those
punches weren’t really connecting at all, elevate more, yo

wall ur drop was coo, punches were aight in this battle..
..structure was okay, but add some personas against ur opponents, aight?


No hate..



Pz

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Voted For: Wall Street

Ok this was a decent battle, but i think that wall street had this one.
WS's stucture and flow was a lot more readable and the punches hit a whole lot harde. there were good personals in WS verse. voc was better as well cos even though LSs verse was ok the vocab was real elementary and the flow was far too basic.
LSs attempted personals just didn't hit hard enough. LS could've swung the battle his way if only he'd come with better flow, and used a more comlex rhyme structure.
But this didn't happen so wall street gets this one

sall good...no hate i knew you would win lol......keep killin em ST...

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

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Voted For: Wall Street

iight as i see it

Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig?
Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig
8/10 good personal/punch
Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me
Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly
7/10 good personal
A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up
Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up
7/10 good punchline
And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be
Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry'
6/10 good punch played concept but different wording
You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G
Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV*
7/10 good pucnhes

35/50



*Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart",
5/10 Wack wording on his name
**On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear,
Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear,
6/10 good personal but i think it woulda sound betta on audio
***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed",
we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead,
3/10 ehh wack ok personal
****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan,
and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn
3/10 Gay attemp to a pun
*****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth,
I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth.
5/10 iight

vote/wall street betta verse overall and solja loose the stars

Voted For: Wall Street

Total Breakdown

Wall Street
Ay, Your A Easy Win For Me, A Quick One You Dig?
Watch Me Serve LS Quicker Then The Food In His Sig
Nice Small Personal LOL
Straight Ripping This Kid, How's He Going To Bother Me
Write Rap? Dude...Can't Even Spell Your Name Properly
LOL I Jus Notice that shit too LOL Damn Nice
A Blasphemy To Think You Got Skills It Don't Show Up
Cuz You Named Yourself Solja And Still Couldn't Blow Up
LOl Im fuckin bout to piss in my pants over here that one was tight man
And Yo, Battle Wall Street How Dumb Can You Be
Solja Kicks Childish Rhymes, No Wonder He's "Infantry'
Not all Dat But It was good Wordplay
You Don't Really Serve In A Unit, And Lying's A Sin G
Cuz The Only Time This Solja 'Post' In 'Lines' Is On RV*
Good Wordplay ...Nice Wordplay...Dope Wordplay

Overall man You Got this battle man Im Still Laughin at the disses man There really on point each line was Directed towards your oppenent and that what I Like to see no self-glorification All disses Shits dope Man NICE

LS
*Yo "Wall Steets" name stinks more than his fart,
his minds lost like the stock from "Wall-Mart",
...Aii....
**On AIM he IM's me constantly buzzin in my ear,
Gave up his ailias's name says "dont say anything" in fear,
......Not Good ....
***He wont shut up talkin bout "peep my OM and drop feed",
we did a collab. of poetry he couldent keep up i held the lead,
...No Punch No Diss ...This was weak
****so Wall please tell me this what will you say when the shit hits the fan,
and admit when you were Yung you droped a Trae and said damn,
...Weak...
*****you will never be better than me homie and thats the damn truth,
I tought you everything you know since you lost ur first tooth.
... Man That was weak...

Overall i Think You need to elavte on DIRECT PUNCHEZ not jus regular disses it sound like you jus fussing and ryming with it man Your stuff was weak and that why I couldnt give you my vot ein this batte

v/ Wall Street