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07-03-05, 11:50 PM
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Tempt
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Be gone, Satan, ya givin me temptations, I see it now
in front of my face is, the thing I’ve been longed after for many many years, but I got its replacement right here. I’m not goin to give in to your tricks, not this one you need to see you r sick, you r gonna be tormented Lucifer in Hell, you may not believe it, but you will you will. Satan...be temptin from all sides Satan...keeps tellin me its fine He is, the power of the Earth He is, the corrupt and the perverse. I got something for you Satan, an offer you can’t refuse a battle with the one, the one who set me loose. Oh you know about that day, when you will fight your creator, you think your gonna win? Oh what a faker. Give it slime, you ain’t got a chance, God made your dumb self, now go and burn in that stance. Armaggedon is comin, you gonna fight a war, but satan you need to realize what is the score. Satan...be temptin from all sides Satan...keeps tellin me its fine He is, the power of the Earth He is, the corrupt and the perverse. God lead us from temptation, put Satan in his place block him from my mind, from my heart I truly praise. The one who saved my soul, got me out of a wicked hole, Dark and bleak and lonely oh, Satan got me there ya know. Jesus, keeps me from temptation all sides Jesus, loves me all the time Jesus, he died for the Earth Jesus, he’s powerful and ominous. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2262038
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07-03-05, 11:56 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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wow, great drop, good topic, flow, structure, and vocab were really good, nice drop, keep it up
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07-03-05, 11:56 PM
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Thanks, uppin!!
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07-04-05, 02:12 AM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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yeah this was pretty tight... ure flow was on point, and like everyone else stated the topic is good... the only thing I would work on is making it longer
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07-04-05, 02:19 AM
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Don't Even Think About It
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I didnt read it...
Why the fuck do you structure your work like that??
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07-04-05, 12:17 PM
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IP:
Uppin this once more
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