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Old 07-06-05, 08:27 PM   #1
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Arrow Finally!!!!!!new Solo Shit From Trip!!!!

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Yea jus sum new shit I layed, peep an leave em sum good feed plz


Title: Step Up

All Vocals done By: Triple_N

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Old 07-06-05, 08:33 PM   #2
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*listening*

i like the beat, good emotion, and yes good use of metas, very lyrical piece im feelin it, very nice flow nice emotion on the hook good drop man im really feeling this, theres not much to say you need to improve on cause im just gettin started with cool edit but this is a nice track man..keep it up, p.s when you gonna be done with the hook on our collab?

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Old 07-06-05, 09:28 PM   #3
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listening..

wow.. very good in the begining.. very nice multi's... and yeah there are very good metaphors.. oh shyt i luv the chorus man.. very creative!! that was hella nice... wow.. very creative man!!! like seriously wow.. lol.. 2nd verse now.. *listening* *gets jealous* lol.. very nice multi's again.. the devliery was just plain great man.. was this one of the beats you bought?? like wow.. seriously very good... 3rd verse.. man once again just plain good man.. you keep elevating with every song when im not lol.. damn you man.. lol.. all i could say is wow man.. 10/10.. the chorus is just wow. the shyt on the left n right. thats jst amaznig.. perfect beat for these lyrics.. very nice..

*Starts writting, tryin to do better*

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*fails*

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lol good job man.. i could seriously hear this in the radio man.. good job
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Old 07-06-05, 09:39 PM   #4
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listening.......like the beat....

the hook is catchy.....i like it

verses are good....i like the multies...delivery is good....flow is really good...

what can i say....im not someone that can tell you how to get better....keep putting tracks out
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Old 07-06-05, 09:44 PM   #5
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aiight listenin'. beat coo

Nice quality goin'. flowin' nicely. Likin' the meta's. Damn this hook catchy. real nice shit there. Next verse, nice flow wit multi's and shit. good shit.liked how you changed your flow on "loose leaf" part. liked angelo line in 3rd verse. goin' nice. Nice emotion and shit. damn shit nice. only thing I didn't like was beat was kinda too slow for my liking. But you did this shit nicely.

Overall, a nice track. I jus really didn't like beat's speed. If it was a lil fast tempo would have been nicer. But overall, you held this shit down. but it's one of your top tracks tho. lol I see you usin' TRI-p-l-e as your new slogan thing. good shit tho. buit overall, nice... 9/10.......
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Old 07-06-05, 10:21 PM   #6
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Ay derrty i like da track mayne i tole you already..verses complement each other well i love da beat its sick and u complement the beat well..chorus iz nyce...you gotta well put together track rii herr .. all da elements are in place and you delivered it nyce keep it movin
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Old 07-06-05, 11:29 PM   #7
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yea this is a hot track son...

ithe flow was flawless as always son...the emotion wasnt really as hype as it usually is...but thats a good thing..lol..i fucks wit the chorus and the beat is kinda catchy too...even tho at first i hated it..*dances*....like i sad man hot ass track...but yo...i think ya voice is to deep for the beat =\..









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Old 07-07-05, 12:01 AM   #8
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aight listening..


aight... i thought the song was solid.. flow was solid.. real consitant.. no messups for real i heard.. lyrically i thought this track was solid.. dont think its among your best, but there wasent nothin to be smacked for in there lol :-P.. I thought this was a real solid drop.. fa sho.. 8/10
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Old 07-07-05, 01:43 AM   #9
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eeeeewwwwwyyyyy...shit was hott dawg...defitnly noddin my head ta this..yo lyrics were dope...flow was dope...and the hook was off the hook...not bad...the beat was ill too....8/10....RTF on "The Timeline"
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Old 07-07-05, 02:23 PM   #10
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yeah trip you showed me this shit last night shit was fire kid...chorus tight everythin tight man keep it up be...and i look forward to that collab kid 1ne..
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Old 07-07-05, 04:56 PM   #11
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word a new senser n triple collab, tight shit.

trip dont forget about our collab wit ike.
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Old 07-07-05, 10:49 PM   #12
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damn, I wanna be able to write like you one day, ROFL...had a hype track with techniQue...this is why I love the internet and hate the radio ROFLMAO...multies are the sikkness in here...flow is recockulous on this dooood...

great stuff...ummm, track of the week?...I think so :thumb up:
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Old 07-07-05, 11:56 PM   #13
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ayo...holla at me maybe we can do a remix if u'd wanna remix this track i already got shit written down for it thats ill.....holla back at me my AIM's "mc slayor" and my MSN's "hood_dawg@hotmail.com
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Old 07-08-05, 06:18 AM   #14
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Diggin the beat, ya flow killed it, feeling the multis and you kept real consistent with em too so definitely props for that already. Vocab was there, had nice level of complexity but everything was understandable.

The hook is very catchy, the kinda stuff you'd start bumping along with right away ya know. Lyrics were good, had nice shit in there, funny stuff as well, just all very catchy and your quality is so damn good, everything sounds so clear.

Like someone else already said, it may not be the very best you did but it's just real solid track and I gotta admit this could be played on radio just like that...

Nice...
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Old 07-09-05, 12:03 PM   #15
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UPing for the boi boi...
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