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Sad Goodbyes.
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Ever felt like you were doin all you can and still
ur life seemed outta hand? The people you loved dyin all around, you sittin there depressed and no cause to be found Blamin yaself when the car came, the crash so loud still echoes in ya brain You cry as you imagine ya friend and the shot that ended her life and brought tears to ya eyes The night the phone rang and u had to go to the hospital cuz ya mom was in ICU while your hearing Amazing Grace in your head your realize everyone you love is dead. Wake up this is a test, wake up, its for the best Because now they’re not suffering anymore The Lord has his reasons for letting them go. Cry and cry and blame yaself, but later on Come to God and let...him come in, because there is your peace, He’s been where you been you just gotta let him in. You realize through it all life is a vapor, but why does everyone have to go down like a sheet of paper. Everyone’s in the ground, 6 feet is where they’re found ur still up ahead not sure what to do, scared to think the next might be you. Askin the Lord pleadin for mercy, for everyone still alive and your safety. U feel so helpless and disconnected, wanna go and try and relieve it. So you try and try, but you just cannot die, you hear a voice inside sayin you cannot lie, to yourself because you have to be strong and go on, bigger plans for you and this is not long. Wake up this is a test, wake up, its for the best Because now they’re not suffering anymore The Lord has his reasons for letting them go. Cry and cry and blame yaself, but later on Come to God and let...him come in, because there is your peace, He’s been where you been you just gotta let him in. R.I.P Misty Buck c/o 02 car crash, Elizabeth Manley c/04 car crash, Diane Banks murdered(aunt), Robert Montgomery heart attack @ 37, Daniel Wahls cancer 49, R.I.P All you who served it all.
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this was good, good flow and a lot of emotion, vocab was good also, keep it up
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thanks ya'll uppin
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wow 2fast you droppin those OM's like crazy keep it up........i liked this peayce nun more els to say...oh and you should sign up for Higher Thinking league in poetry something tells me you would be good at it...BTW The M. nice Sig. .........
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thanks uppin 4 feed
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