http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2285243


As I have the Lord all my hope is constant, while I suffer forever in a yoke of bondage//
Carnage that chokes your conscious with ropes of homage, Exploding notes admonished //
And upon this I’ve spoken honest and been giving nothing back but a broken promise//
A potent conquest packed full of atrocious monsters, that want to destroy His heavenly grace//
I’m the center piece faced with trials and tribulations, temptations of the vilest innovations//
Sin Acting like a barrier that’s hiding my impatience, but the Lord gets me flying to my station//
Feeling the vibe of an invasion, I must stand tough, keep my hands up and fight for the occasion//
If my guard falters I could be torn up quickly, its sort of sickly, but I know that the Lord is with me//
My heavenly force is mixing with the stipulations of the forth infliction, an important diction//
Evolution is just another source of fiction, and I watch as brothers in Christ get dealt with scorned affliction/
I’ve been warned with visions to stay away from the evil, when I face other people to pray with the feeble//
I must reach out to the escaped and deceitful, and may they be captured, and sent to God on the day of the rapture//
Messages straight from a pastor, flanked with the stature that’s helping me give praise to the master//
I’ve seen people become blatantly tampered, pampered by they world, and their flame just gets dampened//
But soon my prayers were thankfully answered, as they search Him out again, and fully repent//
But watch for the pulling descent that drags you deeper and deeper into the gully’s of men//

__________________
LIvInG<>L3Gends

STRAIGHT~

this was good man, flow was good, vocab was pretty good too......the only thing negative about this is the //, those are not necessary, its easier to read without that, but anyways good drop, keep it up servin the Lord

__________________

those are usually my line breaks but the lines are too long for this sites thing, but in word proccessor it looks fine

__________________
LIvInG<>L3Gends

STRAIGHT~

those are usually my line breaks but the lines are too long for this sites thing, but in word proccessor it looks fine......thx for the feed uppin

__________________
LIvInG<>L3Gends

STRAIGHT~