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Old 07-18-05, 02:40 AM   #1
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HW Title - 9th Degree vs. Hotshh!

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8 Lines Minimum
Agree on exact limit in your check ins

Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday

(All due dates are eastern time)

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Old 07-18-05, 09:15 AM   #2
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check in..................down to go 16- 20 in this one
 
Old 07-18-05, 12:41 PM   #3
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I concur.
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Old 07-19-05, 08:13 AM   #4
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i"m ready when u are.........

drop 1st......i'll follow you
 
Old 07-22-05, 11:59 PM   #5
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******my bad its in caps i click and pasted it




ROUND TWO
FOOL YOU DIG? IM CUTTING BACK CAUSE THE ARTILLERY'S TOO BIG
INSTEAD I'LL GRAB A ROCK AND JUST STONE YOU LIKE YOUR NEW SIG
I'LL LEAVE THIS KID SHAGGED........ CAUSE THIS LIL SAMBOS A BIG FAG
SAY HE'S ILL, BUT NO ONE BELIEVE IN HIS DEPTH (DEATH) LIKE ZIG ZAG
HE'S NOT A COMPLETE FAKE, SOME OF HIS VERSE'S A FRACTION HARD
BUT 9TH DEGREE'S BOUT AS REAL AS THE MOVES ON HIS ACTION CARD
YOU'RE LIKE A MUTE RECORDING ARTIST... YOU'RE A 'STRANGER TO CD'
CUZ NO ONES THROWN BIONIC ELBOWS SINCE POWER RANGERS ON TV
IN DIS MATCH I GOT NO GUEST APPEARANCE TO TAKE ME HIGHER BUT
ILL BURN DIS M**FUCKER DOWN WONT BE NO NEED FOR MC FIRETRUCK

***NAH HOTSHH F*CK THAT, DONT TAKE NO CHANCES...FINISH HIM***

HOE YOU LIKE THE BLIND IN CASINOES......... YOU SEE-NO CASH
..................COVERS HIS FACE IN HIS PICS SO HIS PC DONT CRASH
WAITED TIL I DROPPED MY VERSE SO YOU CAN TWEEK YA LYRICS
SO ILL GHOST YOU SO FAST YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SPEAK TO SPIRITS
DA ONLY REASON YOU A VET IS CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE ME "HURT CATS"
U COULDNT "COME FRESH" WIT PEPPERMINT STRIPS AND CERTPACKS
THATS WHY YOUR ASS STAY WACK LIKE THEM CATS IS RECRUITING
CAUSE IT AINT HARD TO "SEE 9 D'S" LIKE BARELY PASSING STUDENTS
U'LL PROLLY WIN DROPPIN DIRT BUT NO MATTER WAT DA SCORE SAYS
IM FLIPPING SO MUCH SHIT ON 9TH HE'LL GROW GRASS FROM HIS FOREHEAD


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Old 07-24-05, 04:26 PM   #6
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******my bad its in caps i click and pasted it

ROUND TWO

FOOL YOU DIG? IM CUTTING BACK CAUSE THE ARTILLERY'S TOO BIG
INSTEAD I'LL GRAB A ROCK AND JUST STONE YOU LIKE YOUR NEW SIG
-Nice Personal and a punch here..

I'LL LEAVE THIS KID SHAGGED........ CAUSE THIS LIL SAMBOS A BIG FAG
SAY HE'S ILL, BUT NO ONE BELIEVE IN HIS DEPTH (DEATH) LIKE ZIG ZAG
-Ahhhh Good Punch.

HE'S NOT A COMPLETE FAKE, SOME OF HIS VERSE'S A FRACTION HARD
BUT 9TH DEGREE'S BOUT AS REAL AS THE MOVES ON HIS ACTION CARD
-Liking the personal w/ Punch

YOU'RE LIKE A MUTE RECORDING ARTIST... YOU'RE A 'STRANGER TO CD'
CUZ NO ONES THROWN BIONIC ELBOWS SINCE POWER RANGERS ON TV
-Ha Good Punch

IN DIS MATCH I GOT NO GUEST APPEARANCE TO TAKE ME HIGHER BUT
ILL BURN DIS M**FUCKER DOWN WONT BE NO NEED FOR MC FIRETRUCK
-Ok personal and a punch


***NAH HOTSHH F*CK THAT, DONT TAKE NO CHANCES...FINISH HIM***

HOE YOU LIKE THE BLIND IN CASINOES......... YOU SEE-NO CASH
..................COVERS HIS FACE IN HIS PICS SO HIS PC DONT CRASH
-Good Pesonal and a punch

WAITED TIL I DROPPED MY VERSE SO YOU CAN TWEEK YA LYRICS
SO ILL GHOST YOU SO FAST YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SPEAK TO SPIRITS
-Nice wordplay.

DA ONLY REASON YOU A VET IS CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE ME "HURT CATS"
U COULDNT "COME FRESH" WIT PEPPERMINT STRIPS AND CERTPACKS
-Meh Explain dont get that

THATS WHY YOUR ASS STAY WACK LIKE THEM CATS IS RECRUITING
CAUSE IT AINT HARD TO "SEE 9 D'S" LIKE BARELY PASSING STUDENTS
-Ok Punch

U'LL PROLLY WIN DROPPIN DIRT BUT NO MATTER WAT DA SCORE SAYS
IM FLIPPING SO MUCH SHIT ON 9TH HE'LL GROW GRASS FROM HIS FOREHEAD
-Ok closer

Overall- nice verse Hotshh had some good punches w/ some personal. Liking your wordplay the 2nd part of the verse Kinda fall, but it was good ok punches nice personals. Keep Dropping

Kept urgin' me to drop my verse, you prolly pre-write bro
'Cuz the only heavywait you had was in the lobby before lypo
-Ok Punch

But in your sig, that belt must reflect upon your rhymes
You're on the grind...only beatin' people in a league with 2 lines
-Ok Punch, Liking the personal

Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes
-Ha Good wordplay, good punch

This hype's a joke, like funny crackheads, why's hatred ya game?
Really you ain't shit, that's not even a play off ya name
-Good Personal and a punch

I'll stay off the lame, lines...it's not that I'm used to war
But every wack concept I thought was one that you've used before
-Meh Ok punch weak but not strong

Hot's just mad I left TE, what's really damagin' this chump
Is right after I left, his crew voted me for battle of this month
-Ok punch and a personal

And I've been comin' wack lately, but there's something I wanna pop in
His skill's real hot...but we already knew every label would drop him
-Ok Punch still weak though

Haha, your verses suck, they depress me, I guess you write how you feel
And had a shadow of doubt...until d/r's followed right on your heels
-Lol Nice closer

Overall 9th that was a good verse, had some personals but the punches were weak in my opinion, I see you was trying to flip the personal into punches but uh it was still weak, some punchs I found good. Wordplays was good. Keep Dropping.

Conclusion- Alright I'mma have to vote for Hotshh, because I felt his punches were more harder. 9th nice verse but in my opinion I felt you came weak, If you added more wordplays into them PunchLines you would've gotten my vote, but they were weak, but still a good verse.
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Old 07-23-05, 12:09 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by MC Firetruck
Puttin out hot shh..... engine revs up
im sick of ur bitin ass, im fed up
ahhh, spark the led up,
u couldnt finish shit, with the lettas
yet again, ill blah diddy blah
u make me laugh *giggling* "hah"
u dont know wats comin for ya,
this shit just might hurt
So i take my hat off to ya,
but thats just the tip of the iceberg


werd.... he's dope
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Old 07-23-05, 01:12 PM   #8
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werd.... he's dope




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Old 07-23-05, 12:12 AM   #9
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get the fuck outta here with that........i cant believe this shit
anyway he probably couldnt fuck with that if he tried
fux you gotta face me again and it wont be like the 1st time
9th i aint ever battling you again
 
Old 07-23-05, 03:16 AM   #10
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Thats how fuckin T..E Gets Down

Overall Best Heads on Rv...Period Point Dot

I dont even gotta say shit bout my Ni99a Drop

Flawless..Made 9th Not even Show......Damn

*Nuff Said*
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Old 07-23-05, 09:20 AM   #11
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no show.............................................. .......................

v/ hotshh!
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Old 07-23-05, 12:13 PM   #12
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I think that 9ths internet or something might be down. I know he wrote a verse for this, he showed me a few lines when he was keying it up the other day..

If hotshh! doesn't care I'll give 9th till tonight to drop, because a no show HW title isn't cool.....

- Reb..
 
Old 07-23-05, 12:34 PM   #13
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i'll wait till tomorrow to vote............give 9th chance to drop......
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Old 07-23-05, 12:45 PM   #14
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If it's cool with hot, then we can get down.
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Old 07-23-05, 12:47 PM   #15
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what chu mean?

9th knew damn well he needed to drop
look at MC firetruck wack ass, THATS 9th
he seen my verse and dont want to battle me
he has 2 no shows in KLL, BOTH AGAINST ME...........HE DONT WANT IT
look how fast he dropped against fux, solo and elooch...\
whats his excuse now?
 
 


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