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07-19-05, 05:58 PM | #1 | ||
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Live On Stage
IP:
what up this is a track i did from the point of view of myself in a live battle check it.....
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07-19-05, 05:59 PM | #2 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
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07-19-05, 07:06 PM | #3 | ||
Evolution
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IP:
ight i'm feeling the beat, where's it from?... ight u come in... umm vocals are kinda low. so its hard to hear u, flow is ight. emotion is meh, needs a bit of improvement.. lyrics ight decent. is there 2 guys on this or you agen this sounds different the voice sounds more clear emotion is ight on this bit lyrics are the same, ye man this is a nice song like it.. keep droppin em man
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07-19-05, 07:08 PM | #4 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
its all me and the beat is from pure bliss productions
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07-20-05, 01:16 PM | #5 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
uppin this track
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07-20-05, 02:18 PM | #6 | |
Ike
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IP:
beat is coo...voice is coo.....need to work on your delivery and emotion some man...flow is ok....could use improvement in a couple parts.......hook...ehh im not really feelin it much...work on your breath control a lil....i can hear you takin deep breaths after every couple words....
overall its not a bad track....add some effects to the hook...make it different from the verses... please leave feed on.....The Perfect Woman...thanks
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07-20-05, 03:51 PM | #7 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
aiiight
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07-20-05, 05:05 PM | #8 | |
New to RV
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IP:
yo..is this the traidmarx that used to be on u.f..??
anyway..beat is cool.. vocals are really low man..it takes away from the track.. flow an emotion is pretty good..this is a better than decent track here fam's.. 7.5/10
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07-20-05, 05:07 PM | #9 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
yea this is the traidmarx from uf... that was a while back but yea thats me
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