yea since everyones been asking me how good i think they are audio wise drop a track and ill give you a full indeph statement on what i think....no bullshit

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www.soundclick.com/leady time to shine...... lol *waits for u to hate*

ok lets see....what your doing good and need to work on...listeing to time to shine

flow/rhyme scheme-you took a interesting rhyme scheme on this beat.....its on point though. your flow is definatly better on the second verse. i only heard one time where i think you slipped. for the most part your flow is on point, and good.

delivery/rideing the beat- this is what is making you stand out from the other uk kids on this site, your delivery is pretty good...but when you deliver you chorus you SUCK...i mean in this song ya chrous it sounded nothin like a hook at all. this is where you need to ride the beat, put a little harmony/melody into the hook, or just swtich up ya flow. but overall ya delivery is decent ...can always be tweaked a lil....but WORK ON YOUR HOOKS.

pronounciation/breathe control- it may just be the "american heads" but most of the time i have no fuckin clue what ya saying...i find i cnat inderstand the rhymin word really. sometimes i slur my rhymin words too.....or your accent is jus fuckin with me....WORK ON PRONOUNCIATION. ....breathe control for the most part its good, jus before the hook i could hear you inhale. but mixing can fix that...

style/lyrics- alright i think its safe to say that most of us are still trying to find or build up or own unique style...your style on this track sounded original your presence and flow and overall sound sounded orginal for the most part....hmm voice, im not one of those cats who judge a track on someones voice. jus cause you dont sound like a big black guy from new york im not gonna hate ya track. voice is you ...do you.....lyrics nothin really stand out. you had a couple of good lines the leady is nice /newspaper line was coo same with the latrine or howeva you spell it line....

What to work on- HOOKS, HOOKS, HOOks, this is your downfall. learn to ride tha beat use the ups and downs of the beat for ya hook make ya voice go up and down. bring in some melody (layer ya hook with like 5 voccal tracks).....Also work On Anounciation (i bielive is the correct term)....cause if i cant understand you than im not buying ya track/ cd.....

done with indpeh critizing....

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leady IMO has to be in the top 3 audio heads in the RV

thanks man appreciate dat... mad respect especially conciderin all da beef n crap from before

that beef is all in the past fams........................

word@u spellin indeph my style

ye ye no doubt bruv...... all i need now is da rest of da site to stop sleepin on me lol

they prolly sleeping on you cause your new to the site but most vets on this site are wack but since there vets people say that they like their music and dont listen to any audio from the new cats in the site......youll get recognized just battle a top audio head.~1~

www.soundclick.com/explicitproductions

peep the life of a legend or london tribute wit leady

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ok listening to life of a legend.

flow/rhyme scheme-ok ya flow is on point, but its not smooth, its choppy in some points ex. instead of saying i have mon-ey.... say i have money. jus smooth it out a bit more polish it up. rhyme scheme is basic a/b style.....

delivery/riding beat- ok i was impressed with you on this track....usually ya real quiet, but ya delivery was pretty good i was feelin it a little...riding the beat you did this well....even in ya verse you rode the beat well...see leady on his chorus he rode the beat, and didnt jus spit a couple bars over and over. you rode the beat well chorus was some what catchy....delivery can be worked on and tweaked

pronounciation/breathe contro- ok this is the same as leady pretty much...it may just be the "american heads" but most of the time i have no fuckin clue what ya saying...i find i cant understand the rhymin word really. sometimes i slur my rhymin words too.....or your accent is jus fuckin with me....WORK ON PRONOUNCIATION. ....breathe control for the most part its good, jus before the hook i could hear you inhale. but mixing can fix that...

style/lyrics- ok ya didnt try and imitate anyone so style for now you are pretty straight, i can tell ya still trying to find ya own style to settle into....lyrics they were pretty good considering you were telling a story instead of goin for punches....overall the lyrics were good for this story, they were a lil corny at times but overal pretty straight

what to work on - smoothen out ya flow, work on ya lyrics a lil bit.....work on announciation.....speak clear....

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thnx man. i appriciate the time u taken to do this safe, n thanks...

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yea i kno wat u mean narc... once i vgot time to record for a battle ima see wmho da most respected is n battle em

then you might wanna battle EC cause hes respected audio wise

damn that shit was nice the way ya flowed and showed emotion about the topic props to both of ya~1~