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Blac-Out 1 16.67%
Atticus 5 83.33%
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Old 08-04-05, 10:11 AM   #1
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Blac-Out vs Atticus

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Aiight, Hopefully I End Up Setting This Right...
Lol I Struggle With This Shit...
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No Hate/Dick/Crew/Ect. Votes...

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Common Shit, Im Gonna Bank On You Not Being An Idiot Haha...

8-12 Lines, Good Luck Man...
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Old 08-04-05, 10:17 AM   #2
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Atticus has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 10:17 AM.
 
Old 08-04-05, 10:24 AM   #3
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Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 10:24 AM.
 
Old 08-04-05, 10:50 AM   #4
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Get At Me If You Need Help With The Wordplay...

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce)

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Old 08-04-05, 11:04 AM   #5
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c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do

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Old 08-04-05, 11:07 AM   #6
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Lolololmao I Liked That Think Twice Line...

Ya, Im Complimenting A Diss To Myself...
Haha Whatever Im Not A Text Battler...

Good Job Mayn...
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Old 08-04-05, 11:09 AM   #7
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yea u had sum dope shit too, mine is well b a text battler, good shit,
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Old 08-04-05, 11:58 AM   #8
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Voted For: Atticus

win, better punches i liked it a lot blac-out's punches were kinda basic no hate though so my vote is for atticus
 
Old 08-04-05, 01:42 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by taz
Voted For: Atticus

win, better punches i liked it a lot blac-out's punches were kinda basic no hate though so my vote is for atticus



this vote shudnt count...tell strobe cuz
he aint explain a godam thing !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-04-05, 12:05 PM   #10
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no hate,....................................uppin.
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Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
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Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
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Rapdemon: haha
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Old 08-04-05, 01:28 PM   #11
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Voted For: Atticus

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
errrr meh..this an aigght personal n wordlat
Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
this was nice...creative hit hard
Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
meh...gave me a chuckle...average
Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce
wow this closer was wack

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
lyrocs on that gangsta tip...average
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
played more than a figure of speech
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
wjers tha diss?
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
damn dude...wtf this is poor even 4 a key
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
decent personal..best bar of drop
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
weak ass closer


blac-Out ur drop was weak...cos all ya lines n concepts were played like mothafuckas....Atticus...came wid a more focused creative drop...both of yall came wack...but atticus took it
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Old 08-04-05, 01:39 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by Acuity
Voted For: Atticus


blac-Out ur drop was weak...cos all ya lines n concepts were played like mothafuckas..........both of yall came wack...



Dissin Blac.......?...........iightt.................Uppi n................
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Old 08-04-05, 01:35 PM   #13
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Pfft Lololmao Aiight Thanks Mayn...

Im Definately Done With Text Haha...
Upping For Some More Votes...
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Old 08-04-05, 01:40 PM   #14
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Voted For: Blac-Out

ighht...

Flow & Structure - Blac...his verse was easier to understand but some barz were still stretched...atticus was all over the place...u was forcin it wayyyy 2 much...idk how u sayin that verse in ur head but it aint clickin in mine !

Punches - Blac...he came alot harder....they was still kinda wack but that "Think Twice" punch was harder then anythin atticus had to spit...atticus that last bar was garbage...u forced it on that n it didnt hit at all !

Metaphors - tie...both of yall had some "OK"? metas...Blac wudda won this catagory but he used that Wig Split shyt twice n played it out UGLYY...dont repeat almost the same punch next time

Multis - NoNe...period !...yall need to add some of them into ur rhymes !

Vote - Blac-Out



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Old 08-04-05, 01:54 PM   #15
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ighht...

Flow & Structure - Blac...his verse was easier to understand but some barz were still stretched...atticus was all over the place...u was forcin it wayyyy 2 much...idk how u sayin that verse in ur head but it aint clickin in mine !

Punches - Blac...he came alot harder....they was still kinda wack but that "Think Twice" punch was harder then anythin atticus had to spit...atticus that last bar was garbage...u forced it on that n it didnt hit at all !

Metaphors - tie...both of yall had some "OK"? metas...Blac wudda won this catagory but he used that Wig Split shyt twice n played it out UGLYY...dont repeat almost the same punch next time

Multis - NoNe...period !...yall need to add some of them into ur rhymes !

Vote - Blac-Out



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Pffft Haha Ok Mayn...
What A Fucking Idiot, I Had 3 Syllable Rhyme Scheme In Almost All My Bars...
Atleast A 2 In Every Single One...
And I Didnt Have A Single Forced Rhyme...

Someone Is Oviously After Some Battle Credits And Posts...
Lol What A Fucking Idiot...
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