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08-15-05, 08:46 PM
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Apostrophe vs. Dizzee Rascal
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08-16-05, 01:51 AM
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Blow Me
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check check check
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08-16-05, 07:14 AM
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Middle Weight
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08-16-05, 02:44 PM
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Ok his name is Apostrophe hence the Ap wordplay
Bitch has to borrow pride, since he hasn't got any swallow Swing an axe like spacecraft abandonments 'leaving Ap-hollow' /Apollo |
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08-16-05, 02:45 PM
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Middle Weight
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*to swallow..... (spelling error)
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08-19-05, 01:49 AM
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Dizzee's poor..searchin the uk streets for food.. and it's really a shame boy..
and this Rascal's just happy for a meal... even without the fucking lame toy..
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08-19-05, 02:38 AM
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Dizzee -
Line 1: Didnt hit at all and wasnt used as a line to build up the 2nd one. Basically a pointless waste fa real. Line 2: Just because you used the first 2 letters of his name, it doesnt make this line nameplay. I felt it was weak. If you were going to go this way at all you could have worded it a lot better. Apostrophe - Line 1: First line was pretty much weak. BUT, it did in fact build up your second one. You also used a little nameplay in both lines which I liked a lot better than just the first 2 letters of his name. Line 2: Pretty funny shit, made me laugh. Didnt think you were going to go that way with the punch. At first I was kinda like blah, but after re-reading it I was like dope/funny shit son. V/APOSTROPHE......................... |
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08-19-05, 03:08 AM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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vote/ ap... top ten nomination easily
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08-19-05, 05:58 AM
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Dr....just spelling my name........................
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08-19-05, 02:54 PM
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LMAO @ me getting DR's.. C'mon kid take a loss..
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08-19-05, 08:46 AM
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vote dizee rascal/
dizzee came strong in both lines......funny wordplay...decent punch....7/10 yo apostrophe...youre first line wasnt good, but ure second was rlly funny i liked that bt jus came short IMO 6/10
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08-19-05, 09:58 AM
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Vote:apos
even if i liked dizz punch............. i re-read apos and find out he comes harder......
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08-19-05, 10:51 AM
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I Hurt.
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Dizzee's was wayyyy forced.. Apostrophe, that was pretty decent man, nice job.
Vote - Apos |
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08-19-05, 11:33 AM
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.The Movement.
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v/apostrophe...
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08-19-05, 12:28 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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v/apostrophe
Dizzie had nicer concept..but I thought he used it bad. |
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