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09-02-05, 10:15 AM
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"Hate On Me" - Intermental (Best Song Yet From Inter)
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My best song yet...
www.soundclick.com/intermental took a long time and id appreciate sum feedback.. its called "Hate On Me Now" Drop Links and Ill RTF straight Away Links will follow
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09-02-05, 10:17 AM
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206552
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206552
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09-02-05, 10:27 AM
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its nice i dont think its ya best personnally the flow is good heard it go off only like 3 times thru the whole song for a short period i like the lyrics nice the delivery is good i thought you dont the backing vocals a bit much n a few but its nice you should have put a lil more emotion into it overall good drop keep up
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09-02-05, 10:28 AM
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ok......thanks upin
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09-02-05, 12:22 PM
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beat:is ok...different kind.........
song is like hiphop...u know...not like raw rapping...like hip hop....but kinda cool, ur quality is way more better....................and this is gd drop
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09-02-05, 12:24 PM
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lol thanks for the feed...but hiphop not rap???....lmao...im confused now...but thanks alot
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09-02-05, 01:56 PM
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upppin...........
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09-02-05, 02:51 PM
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Beat is nice i like it,but like The Name said its alot more hiphop and your quality is ALOT better,flow is nice too!!!  |
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09-02-05, 02:58 PM
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some of the l lines seemed forced
didn't like the echo ablibs felt the beat and some of the lyrics not bad keep elevatin -Storm
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09-02-05, 02:59 PM
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thanks...........
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09-02-05, 04:05 PM
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thanks alot..........
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09-02-05, 05:09 PM
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I liked the beat...
about your flow...ur flow will be on point for a few bars...then, it'd seem like you lost site of the beat...that's partially breath control, but the rest is simply writing lyrics that fit the beat...Listen to the flow, if it seems like you're off beat, re-write or re-spit a line Lyrics: pretty decent in spots This was a good attempt...u got heart dawg But, I agree that this wasn't your best. I think the Dabatos track was your best. good try though...keep elevating ur making progress 1 |
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09-02-05, 05:11 PM
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thanks i appreciate imm re-try at lyrics on this
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09-02-05, 08:05 PM
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