freestyle from my chem class

if i come through strapped and u aint strapped
u gun get smashed ur hole kru trashed
slashed after the lead hits ya
leavin ya head and body disfigured
get tha picture im describin
u subscribin to my rymes like a mag
ull get lit up quick.....u's a fag
jags...wat im rollin or strollin
thru ya hood wit dat heat im holdin
play cards u foldin...i gotta mean bluff
i no u aint tuff buff ripped or jacked
round my way u get shot stabbed and smacked
heads gettin cracked bleedin pouring
fucking ur girl on the couch wyle u sleepin snourin
then put her on the street so she creepin horing
and i rote this freestyle cuz chemistry class is boring


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meh its not a freestyle...its a keystyle
secondly ur structure is quite off...nothen the less....your vocab is rather simple......and it just wasnt powerfull....gutta come lyrically stronger......3/10.......yessum

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