Battle Rules:

30-40 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
NO HATE


3-0 KO

FINAL BATTLE

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-27-05 at 05:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win


Reopened for 21 more days on 10/15

Im checkin in now man,

make sure you check in soon...

ima drop by tonight, you do the same?

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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 12:02 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 12:45 PM.

i'll try and drop tonight as well.

I ain't making any promices though.

my verse done posted.....so you can post yours anytime

good shit....hopefully voting ain't gonna take that long.

dope battle.......................................

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pollz, good battle both came strong...............

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Voted For: Daubs

good battle both y'all....


DAUBS......free-range structure same as me, i hate forced structure's now ure flow was tight consistently, i think there was only one bar near the start that was a little choppy. u had some nice punches, a lot of original concepts in there and a couple of bars that OMFG!! they made me crack up like a fuckin madman. that one about the sewers was dope as hell. the creativity was dope as shown in the originality, although some played concepts were in there, and a couple of bars seemed a little basic to me, overall ure wordplay was dope, u used it well and mixed it up in ure punches and personals to make an affective verse, OVERALL: 8/10


NK........probably one of the best verses i've seen you put out, but thats down to the length mostly, longer verses kick ass. u had the free-range structure going on to and ure flow was consistently dope, not a single spot that went off in my opinion. ure wordplay was real good, you used it for some good punches and personals. creativity was cool in places, but the main thing that let you down is you had far too many played concepts, i think there was shit about biting style, dickriding, forcing shit, lines about fuckin his girl, sickness lines and some more. daubs had some to, but you had far too many, you did put some nice twists on a couple of them but still they were played. OVERALL: 6.5/10


V/ - DAUBS

.....purely because he had a more consistently harder hitting and original, creative verse, he had some played concepts, but NK had a lot more and his punches lacked in comedy and power when compared with daubs.

no hate

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checkin polls...............daymn this ish is long mayn

Daubs fucking owned him.......

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you come into EVERY one of my battles...saying the same shit.

Is that all's you do?


and mystic.....we don't need help uppin,thank you.

Kindly,fuk off.

Sadly I don't have enough posts to vote, but here's nothing I've noticed.

Maybe I have one weak bar a verse, but this time my luck aint shut
But Natural Killa.....Shite...I already gone and fucked it up

Was incredibly similar, maybe even bitten from this Fracture punch against Espionage on Urbanprowlers.

I say one wack thing a verse, and already my lucks struck
...ESPIONAGE...... Gawd damnit I already fucked up

The was the way I saw it

ur brain thicker than wool 'n flem..ur crew got us all barking 'n strife
cos a member of LL's in the pen
......so no wonder everyone's started to type...
cappin this song..u rappin so long and u ain't groom anything that'd blow
ur forkin ur lame raps to everyone...but you still ain't spoon any of the hoes
capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure
fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure

vs

Now you swear you gonna win this,it takes more to phase Daubs
But i am connecting with nature...like trees with chain-saws
Natural kills-A...so "lphabet" is now missing its pressence
And your words flow well.......when your spittin on letters
Second place is where u be-heading...so take off the neck shield
And im eatin nat up...like porn shows featuring mrs beddingfield
Im leaving NK green and envious, like bread thats stale
And am not tossin coins when i say trini gives head 2 tails
He looks like, smells of and acts like shit...but we already knew this
Because NK don't live by the sword......he just lives by the sewers
Look, this never has been hasnt been here long, n he'salready past it
& girls hate on trini...cos posting on RV is the only time hes active

Daubs came suprisingly nice actually, he had a very good amount of quotables and even his none quotables were pretty solid. Natural Killa came good too, just not really that quotable. Good battle actually, probably the best battle I've read on this site in recent times.

V/ Daubs