My quality as usual ain't the hottest but it's decent i think. Switched up styles all 4 verses and as always, this song is all freestyle. The first chorus was off a lil and i was too lazy to change it.

Here's the track
Put ya head on my shoulders

All feed is appreciated thanks

Sorry forgot the links again

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...38&page=2&pp=15
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209899
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...18&page=2&pp=15

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I dont like the start of the beat, actually overall I dont like thsi beat at all. Your flow is really shaky, you rushed a lot of your lines. Your emotion needs work as well. lyrics weren't to bad but i think they could use a bit better. the hook you did was kinda boring like you just said the same line a bunch of times. quality aint to bad the adlibs were alright but you'll learn different ways as you play wit cool edit more.

anyway can you rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209869

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peepin now.......waitin for it too load i hate these new soundclick players GRRRRR.... anyways.....the beat is alright....seems too fast pace for me...but wait the change up is hot as hell.....quality is horrible lol u need too work on mixing but ya flow is nice.....voice is generic but u could change it up......u should work on mixing thats like the only u need too wry bout.....the hook is kinda ehhh ..just ehh....change that up too...but yeah overall decent....6/10

return the fav:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210033

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I dont like the beat...
and your voice...
I hate it..
ugh..
I cant listen to it
and your quality sounds kinda muffled, muzzled, something
and the hook is so, arggh
"PUT YA HEAD ON MY SHOULDERS"
Negative!
sorry, I can't listen to this track, there's nothing I like about it.
i advise you get more experience with CEP2, if you cant get a high quality mic.
cos CEP2 got shit that will clear your track right up
do that, and re record this, and I PROMISE I will listen to it

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The Beat is KInda strange... Its aight though, Quality is pretty rough, Lyrics are aight, But yah flow needs work.. JUst get that down and improve your quailty, and maybe make your hooks more creative and it would be a dope song..

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