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10-02-05, 12:13 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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Black Dragon - Listen Up
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210206
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210366 ---------------------------------- my quality was really bad on this track.......but otha than that 'preciate da feedback............ http://www.rideinconline.com//play....&mode=song_hifi or http://www.rideinconline.com/bands/466/ pz ~1~
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10-03-05, 06:16 PM
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IP:
uppin..........................
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10-03-05, 06:51 PM
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Listenin'...
HEY I used to this beat too haha... Quality is bad, but at least you admitted it... Flow is decent...choppy in places...but decent overall...maybe make your lines a little longer...Delivery is good...overall it was decent just polish up ya flow a little... Keep it up... |
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10-03-05, 07:22 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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'preciate da feedback.........................
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10-03-05, 07:24 PM
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We should do a collab by the way.
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10-03-05, 09:22 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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yea man that'd be strate..........
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10-03-05, 09:43 PM
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Ike
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IP:
Listening......
like the beat...heard it before on soundclick.... yea the quality is horrible...but u know that.... when you stack your verse....then over dubs are too loud.... DAMN @ how short this is..................... your flow could use some touch ups....its not BAD...but its not great either....work on switchin it up some....and gettin more complex with it.... Delivery and presence is ok...... decent.... PLEASE return the favor on my song....FireMan.......itd be much appreciated
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10-03-05, 09:44 PM
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L.E
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Please return the favor on mine too...
"Oh So Lovely" Thanks... |
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10-04-05, 04:58 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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aiite consider it done.....................
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10-04-05, 05:01 PM
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Ike
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IP:
my bad...didnt see you already returned the favor.......thanks
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10-10-05, 09:14 AM
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OYD
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IP:
Beat: loud as hell..decent though
Flow: WTF...all that HISS in ur vocals...u didn't hear that dawg?..flow is basic Rhyming: basic Delivery: better than ur flow...but still lackluster Overall: not feelin it 1 |
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