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10-24-05, 12:56 AM
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37. Black Arts vs. 38. Macca
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 2 Lines Check Ins due Wednesday Verses due Friday (All due dates are eastern time) Read the Rules if you are unsure about them.. |
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10-24-05, 07:47 AM
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WhoAreYou?
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Black Arts checkin in
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10-24-05, 06:37 PM
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Back....
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checkin in.........
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10-24-05, 07:34 PM
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WhoAreYou?
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Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you........................................... .................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it |
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10-25-05, 11:13 AM
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Back....
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it hard to realize the line above are wack
No flow no votes I was thinking............. ............................damn was that a rap
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10-25-05, 11:14 AM
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NO SURRENDER
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V./ Black
Shit, he self glorified and still took this, weak macca.
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10-25-05, 02:35 PM
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In ya area.
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Both of you stop using the 3-line punchline technique, at least until you actually know how to use it...or at least not use it horribly like you displayed here.
V// Macca and Black Arts both lose
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10-25-05, 05:47 PM
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v/ black arts...........
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10-25-05, 06:09 PM
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Vote - Macca ...
And here is the reason. Both individuals came basic, but Macca had a rhyming punches. I think punches are suppose to rhyme right? |||DRKMAN||| , you had a pretty good concept. But, I've seen that flipped way better in the past. No hate though, just try to be more creative...
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10-25-05, 06:42 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP:
Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you........................................... .................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it too many dots..seemed to self glorify..and as said before...the 3 line thingy ain't work good.And really...garbage/halved it...I don't see how you can make it rhyme..even accented heavily. it hard to realize the line above are wack No flow no votes I was thinking............. ............................damn was that a rap 1st line...hard to realize the line above is whack?Uhh..I think that compliments.It's sposed to be it AIN"T hard to realize.And the punch wuz damn basic.. v/Black Arts or Souljah or w/e... |
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10-25-05, 07:23 PM
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Insane in the textbrain
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IP:
Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you........................................... .................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it ^^meh very simple self glory it hard to realize the line above are wack No flow no votes I was thinking............. ............................damn was that a rap ^^too simple, no wit both weak, so Black gets it for actually making his bar more creative, better flowing v/Black
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10-25-05, 07:26 PM
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garb - ige
halved - it perfect rhyme?
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10-25-05, 07:40 PM
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yer thats exactly what i woz thinkin, how duz garbage and halved it not rhyme???? 
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10-25-05, 07:54 PM
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no...doesn't rhyme at all.. garb-ige..<--pronounced just like that halved-it...<-halve is pronounced HAVE-d...so have-d-it |
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10-26-05, 05:12 AM
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in the UK we don't pronounce halved it as have-d-it we say haavd it so you can't penalise just because you don't know jack about the UK |
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