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Old 11-04-05, 06:39 PM   #1
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Old 11-04-05, 09:11 PM   #2
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whoa not feeling ur intro voice you sound umm young need to get soem bass added to ur vocals
beat idk its really basic not feeling it to be honest too fast for you i think
flow ok not great though you could use improvement here
lyrics pretty basic nothing stood out to be honest with you
presence/emotion actually pretty good here you have a really bad lisp though lol liek one of the worst ive ever heard i think idk some type of speech impediment
overall ok track its hard to understand soemof ur words cause of ir lisp lol but flow was pretty straight and ur presence was there
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Old 11-04-05, 09:13 PM   #3
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wow ur voice is deftgdtyhfgjufyujftyufyu...... the quality was good.. and ur flow reminds me of what i do on the toilet... and its not rap...... good try though. And ur chorus reminds me of what i do on the toilet to.... and its not make choruses....
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Old 11-05-05, 06:19 AM   #4
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^Thanks Will Appear..

And "Doc Train" - Your presence here makes me wonder - Why your mother didn't abort you before your immature brain took control of you..smh..Up for real feedback...Not no "deftgdtyhfgjufyujftyufyu"..ffs
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Old 11-05-05, 12:59 PM   #5
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...age=3&pp=15will you just leave some feed on teams 4 track for me you dont nee to vote id jsut like some feed
u want to collab someimte?
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Old 11-05-05, 01:40 PM   #6
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Its locked..How shall i send ya tha feed?..

UPPPPPP THISSSSSSSS TRACKKKKK..
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Old 11-06-05, 11:59 AM   #7
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Old 11-06-05, 12:23 PM   #8
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Ahh damn sorry..Try going to

http://idea.dmusic.com

and choose it from there..Thanks..Tell me if you run into anymore probs..
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