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11-06-05, 02:14 AM
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The Rulers Back
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I Want You Back (Feat Marvin Gaye)
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Word New shit had to do it when i found tha beat showed it to couple peeps before i posted got some good reactions wasnt gonna post it but triple peep'd an was likin it so i decided to post so props to him for that anyways enjoy =1=... http://www.soundclick.com/decreeus http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213331 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213730 |
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11-06-05, 06:35 AM
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Dope beat i love mavin gaye.......flow is always on point with you.......lyrics very nice not to hard which is good........luving the mavin gaye bits.....delivery is sweet ooo sorry i mean dope lol!!!! 8/10 |
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11-06-05, 07:10 AM
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OYD
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beat is dope
vocals a tad loud-ish flow is pretty good...but cud be smoother on beat...u were on beat, but u didn't own this beat not bad lyrics are good solid track dawg 1 |
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11-06-05, 07:34 AM
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Nt Your Average
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Like The Beat.....
You Coming On..Lil Loud....Good Lyrics So Far Flows Good Emotion Could Be upped A Lil Dope Delivery I like How You Come On Sound Real Confident Overall This Track Is 8.5/10 Think Emotion Cud Be upped
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11-06-05, 11:54 AM
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Middle Weight
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listnenin...
like the beat, nothin amazin rappin starts, bit loud... ur obviously tryin to put a lot of emotion in this but its not really workin sample comes in, bit 2 quiet but still koo 2nd verse... still 2 loud, basically everythin i sed bout the 1st verse, good lyrics tho hook sample again, fits good wit the beat, but not wit the verses 3rd verse... same as ur other 2, this wud be really hot if u'd put some emotion into it again (u did this wit ur put ur hands up song 2) the end is too abrupt, u need to let the beat fade out for a few secs |
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11-06-05, 12:45 PM
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Hell yeah
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listening: beat is ill, beat starts off to slowly, not your best track seriously i dunno, flow is dope, quality is getting better and better, nice lyrics seriously, overall dope track man keep em coming,
ps: do a mixtape or a demo man, i could produce for you if you want to , and for free  |
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11-06-05, 12:49 PM
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The Rulers Back
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^Emotion is actually jus right for tha track cause if you listen i keep it mellow except on some words im sayin to show anger etc...as far as tha beat endin word it ends to short iunno why it was like that an tha samples were already on beat so i cant help it if they was low..=1=
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11-08-05, 01:54 PM
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The Rulers Back
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Upp............
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11-08-05, 02:23 PM
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Not_Indeph
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I'ma peep this when I get home. In return you owe me head. pc
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11-08-05, 07:50 PM
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Power Hungry
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yeah, vocals are too loud.
not enough emotion, flow was on point. I dont really dig love songs that much. you need more emotion, its spoilin the track completely the 2nd verse is a step down flow wise from the 1st verse. overall, its an aiigh, track just decrease your vocals, and add emotion, it prolly would've been fire.
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11-08-05, 08:30 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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word
this a pretty decent track the first thing i noticed is that the delivery is kinda weird i think if anything, it should be a bit more layed back on this kinda track you seem like you shoutin a lil too much for this kinda a track.. at least for the first verse im loving the lyrics, they real str8 the flow is on point, i think i only found like one spot you sort of fell off emotion wise you coo, jus work on delivery a bit and this would be real solid but keep the whole angry thing in the 3rd verse, since the lyrics match the delivery there... so word, overall it was pretty solid... MAS ON EM!
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11-08-05, 10:54 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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ehhh... track is aiight.... vocals way too loud... beat was nice but teh samples were kinda low... let MG be heard since ya paying tribute to the man by featuring him on ya track, nah mean?... presence was decent but emotion seemed forced... i was expecting more from how you were promoting it... kinda disappointed me like Nas's first album... it was good but i thought it would be better... one
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11-09-05, 06:25 AM
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The Rulers Back
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Apreciate tha feed..tizz i tried diff delivery on this not my norm...as for samples bein low i cant help it it was how tha beat was vocals were to loud but what you expect from my 10 $ headset mic....upp
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11-09-05, 01:43 PM
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Power Hungry
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you implied that your vocals was too loud because of your $10 head set Imma give you another $10 to stfu *smacks your face*
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11-09-05, 01:31 PM
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Power Hungry
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$10 head set mic have nothing to do with it. lol
just decrease your volume.
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